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Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Lord of DC

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I like the team building but it really force the story just got fast and complicated and the mc personality is like one sided

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Gabrielthehuman
GabrielthehumanLv4Gabrielthehuman

Honestly, I prefer that you do not form a team because the story is ruined. you have to concentrate on the mc in the world of dc, there are extremely powerful enemies, have a team and give them powers just to be with you, it does not work in the story, it is better an mc just to strengthen. A serious suggestion that you would return to the story of Altura. that you do not give him companions or that he is so attached to people that he is a little indifferent, since he controls the darkness. Also, if you like the power of darkness, you can change it and order the bloodline of Alucard, because if you have seen hell, you will know that Alucard has the ability to control the darkness, in addition to the great variety of abilities that Alucard has . PD: I love you <3

DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv13DragonGodSmith3000

I’m wondering what happens when he devours a metahuman will he fake some of their power and abilities if so you definitely need to devour zods corpse when the time comes also start a private security firm become then branch out toward tech an stuff later when mc gains genius intelligence skills from a corpse or something

Roshaan
RoshaanLv6Roshaan

thx

ravendxd
ravendxdLv6ravendxd

thanks for the chapter

Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

So did mc get turned into werewolf or no

Pirate_King_NIKA
Pirate_King_NIKALv5Pirate_King_NIKA

Thanks for the chapter

therummaster
therummasterLv5therummaster

Did you really give power to a thug.....like I don't understand you man you keep on trying to make a team and it seems forced, plus so far he is not experimenting with his power that he wished for idk why he even wished for it when the weird shadow asked him too.