An interesting story so far, at the moment heavily inclined towards a medical testing setting. How this will change with time is something that will be interesting to see. Overall few mistakes, most of them relating to punctuation, a good read I'd recommend.
Since the story had just begun, I won't be able to speak much about it. First of all, the style of writing is interesting although there are several grammar errors here and there. However, it does have a dark, mysterious, and suspenseful beginning which makes you wonder what will happen next. I'm interested in how the author goes with the whole werewolves and the whole Alpha and lyncan thing. Keep it up! >3</
