lynerparel
I was searching for a good novel and then found it yesterday.... didn't hope this will be a great story....love the way this story is going....i appreciate your work author and thanks for a good novel๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is a wonderful romance story with a strong female lead(as in no knight in shining armor rescuing a totally defenseless and sometimes useless person which is A.K.A. FL), with its pace neither too fast nor slow. It gives subtle hints about individual character's past which gives readers a fun time trying to guess what could have happened to have cause this. The storyline is line is quite relatable, the interaction between characters are well written. Overall it is a nice story which you would love to snuggle yourself to sleep with.
Not gonna sugar coat but it is a slow start. Now for people like me who love slow starts it's a gem among the many straws of hay that you find on this site. It's different. There is still a sense of the upper crust but at the same time so down to earth it's nut a dread. Definitely recommend as a great read when you want to snuggle up with a blanket. Which I have been doing! Writing: almost 100% fantastic. Honestly it's 99.99% there do let's round it up to 5 stars. Why because it doesn't take away from the story. If someone make one mistake every 5 chapters they are already above the rest. This is a super human ability plus you get a feel of how everyone is thinking, acting and feeling that you dive right in. That my friends is quality writing. Stability: we all got lives. We upload when we can, so if your uploading at your own pace it's because you are making sure you are delivering quality! So good job for keeping up the story๐ Characters: There is a variety! You got a FL that is flaw but perfect in her own way. A ML who is hiding his flaws and pretends to be perfect. A dynamic were the ML definitely falls in love first and a FL that is absolutely precious. With an air of mystery for both characters you yell at each one to open up to one another so you have that Awww satisfaction. Plus a cat! I love cats (I lie I love all animals) so you get you Nya moments too. World: it's still building up but considering the FL's dilemma that's everything. So it's practically perfect to see the world through someone else's eyes who is living a life not all of us have experienced. Overall I thinks it's great. Like I said a good snuggle up read. I have definitely fallen asleep with my phone in my hands as I read but mind you I would be up until 1 in the morning. So not the novels fault that I've fallen asleep I blame the novel for being so damn cute, funny, mysterious and G*d damn wonderful cause I ain't ready to stop yet. ๐
8 chaps in.. i came expecting a story reflecting modern issues such as eating disorders. thought i didn't see much of that probably because im only a few chaps in. anyways, the story is quite rich so far, im expecting something real wholesome :) ill collect this to read more later <3 The novel starts off with the old classic but good "left something behind" which brings our characters togthers. real good considering this is your first romance novel. i approve.
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