luoshenhua
It's a great story. I haven't read any stories about people leveling up their abilities so this was interesting. I also liked how she combined both her identities and the fact that she's just a normal looking girl like everyone else makes her more relatable. Good work and keep it up! There were times when certain sentences didn't make sense but with more work, you could make this an even better story.
I have to say I love the description used for everything! It really brings a good flavor to the story. The character design and the details are great and I love how the plot is going til now. My only note is that long paragraphs sometimes make the reader lose their focus, but other than that, I love this!!!!
Carrying the soul of Jiang Xiulan, a apex cultivator who died due to her Dao Companion's betrayal during her tribulation and the body of Liu Lan, a bottom-feed cultivator who found a treasure and died because a stronger person coveted it, Jiang Lan is reborn! Any guesses how this new girl dies? The sect is named Cursed Ghost Sect, so I expect horror elements later on. Plus, chance of having a revival based cheat! Can't really comment much due to only 5 short chapters being released, but the story seems promising.
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As the author, I'm gonna shamelessly give myself my first review. Since I'm just creating the story as I go, I don't even know what's going to happen next haha. The story starts of a bit slow and in a pretty standard xianxia format, but I hope it's still enough to keep readers interested. Excited to see where my story will be heading next! I welcome any kind of critiques, comments, and questions!