Moiraine
So personally, I feel that this is one of the best fantasy novels I've read on Webnovel so far. The writing quality, story development, and world building are all amazing, especially this early on in the story. With that said, let's get into the scores. Some minor spoilers ahead. Writing Quality: 4.5/5 The writing quality is phenomenal for a webnovel, and especially for one written on WN. There are very few errors, and the flow of the story is fairly smooth. There are no half stars on WN, so a full five marks here! Stability of Updates: 5/5 The worst category on WN. So far updates are consistent which is all I ask. Just don't drop below a chapter a week and we're good. Story Development: 4.5/5 Another nearly perfect score. The story development is slow, but progressing well. The author has woven characterization and world building into the development of the story, and manages to fit multiple plotpoints into each scene which is great. Character Design: 5/5 The characters are all fairly diverse. Our MC, Scarlett, feels weak and insecure on the inside. However, the other characters (with the exception of the big girl) all seem to think she's incredibly strong and determined, which is shown through her actions. While most of the characters are fairly one-dimensional so far, the author has slowly been adding more aspects to each main character, helping to round them out and give them a more realistic feel. Full marks for now! World Background: 4/5 The world is the only part of the story which feels a little lacking so far. It appears to be a fairly ****** fantasy world, with tribes and kingdoms divided by element, and an antagonistic race of near-human vampires with a penchant for human blood. The village that our MC is from is a village of women who specialize in fire magic. With a rich warrior tradition designed to churn out strong warriors who can fight the enemy race (the Hova) and carry on the village's traditions. While the world is interesting, it feels rather bland at points. There's a lot of potential here, but for now the world is the one part of the story that feels slightly lacking. However, that is only when being compared to the rest of the story which is phenomenal. Overall, I give this story 4.8 out of 5 stars. It's a great story with some room for improvement. But the base story that Moiraine is starting out with is fantastic, and I can't wait to read more!
This is really well written and not plagued by typos and grammar errors like most novels. It starts at a slower pace, but it does a great job of worldbuilding and letting you in the fantasy setting where the story happen. Main character sounds beautiful and quickly become a warrior that kicks ass. Several plot twists and interesting characters in the first chapters. Updated daily since first posted so another good point. Definitely worth reading.
Amazing novel, one of the best I have ever discovered here in webnovel. While I was reading through the story, the entire scenario was constantly playing in my head like a movie with VR. That's the height of immersion I have experienced while reading this novel. To those who are still lurking around in the reviews section.... Yeah you... And you... Try to read the first 10 chapters... Welcome to the world of fireheart
An amazing novel of a great writer! Once you start reading it, you can't stop at all. The characters feel completely real to the point you are going to believe that they are right next to you. The world background is very solid and the story compelling enough to glue you to the screen. Join the journey of the young Scarlett as she does her rites of ascension and prove to everyone what she is capable of doing. Watch her discover both love and hate, happiness and sorrow, joy and grief, as she goes through all kinds of trials in the complex continent of Jakara. Enough of this synopsis' thingy already. What are you still waiting for? Go to read this amazing story right now!
Writting quality checked Stability of update idk yet precisely Story development +-20chapter very good, neat and tidy in the storyline, little complicated but understandable Character design nice there is sexual scene (lesbi also straight one) but not over focused in that (more in plot of the story I like that) World background there is background explained even map drawing for us reader The author prepared very well in the storyline Rarely do review but this novel worth it