Reviews of Mistaken Soul : First

Such a unique story..u guys should read it..a lot of unpredictable things happen..not sure u guys can guess or not..but a lot of sweet things too

(No spoilers) So hear me out.. The story has a past/present perspective which is something I am not very familiar with. But even though it may be confusing in some areas, I really enjoyed reading it. My third romance novel, so I be considered an expert in this field. BUT AUTHOR! We need to spice it up! Its...its to superficial :( I really liked the twists made between mc and the lover, and there are some parts which just had me laughing like some idiots, the problem lies in the weak romantic aspects! Grammar is good, and I see you kept improving along the way(which is a huge plus in my book) however, there is something I always share with other authors. And that is to always strive to improve your vocabulary! It really increases the diversity of the story, and would help you with cac description and development. Character design is on.the high end in my list, but vocab is a must! :) Stability of updates are hella good. So I'll give you some extra starts there. Overal, I would give you a 4.5/5 But yeah, here's a 5/5 for helping bring some diversity to my library😂 keep it up!

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Well i read it until Chapter 24, cant help but give my review in this novel..... i kinda enjoy reading it.. i like the romance in it.. its abit cliche but i like it.. theres always a spice in the story that will not get u bored from reading it... i just hope that these two leads will not break apart.. i like them together from the start of their love life though... 😁😁

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Stories are amazing keep it up, thank you author sama its make my time much consume in stock every time i started reading every stories IV'e forgotten my daily Routen responsible in my house. . . . . Sometimes i fell crazy grrrr r r r I need more stone ! ! ! ! !

i love this even as a new author it is very well executed the even the first chapter had me hooked i haven't read much but i will be sure to im a new author too and to be frank this kind of work inspires me its well written and i see you put work into it even editing the chapter when needed i also edit a lot but mostly because of grammar mistakes i can't wait to see what the more experienced work will be good luck author

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Writing quality: 10/10 👑 Stability of update/status: complete💁 Story development: very smooth and everthing connects well 🌟 Character design: Female main character BUT it also has different POV which makes it very interesting💖 World background: Modern world 🌎 OVERALL: READ IT! Because its such a cute and emotional story that makes it feel like you were going through that character's journey!!🐭😍💓

Ah, reading this brings back memories. I think every author has gone through this phase. Because this was how I used to write! The idea and the overall plot both have good potential. I read a few chapters. I see a struggle in grammar (as previously noted by the author) as well as the flow of the story. There is definitely room for improvement. Key points I want to emphasize: > Verb tense. Commonly, narratives are in past tense while the dialogues depend on the situation. The tense of a verb can confuse readers. It becomes hard to distinguish which one is actually past and which one is the present when the narrative contains both. They're really important in dialogues too. The words the character spoke could be misinterpreted by the receiver (and the readers) Consistency is key. > The sequence I get it. Every writer wants to lure readers in. The sequence of scenes is really important because readers could suddenly loose interest if it's too long or too slow BUT there has to be ample time to explain the situation or to add some descriptive narrative. There are parts where I had a hard time picturing the scene like I needed a little more to completely understand it. At the same time, a writer would like to keep a few things for a little mystery so some scenes are sped up a little in fear of a reader's attention span. You don't have to be. Details are good. It helps readers to get into the minds of the characters. To symphatize with them, to be happy for them... by focusing more on the scene transitions, readers might instead feel detached from the characters and lose interest. I remember struggling with this and realized... I didn't know my characters that well. I just knew the surface and because of that, that's what comes across while writing the story which is normal for a first draft but I'd advice to go back and add more of them once you do know them better. > Actions speak louder than words This is something I still want to improve on myself. The thought patter of a character could be too short or too much. It's really up to the writer how much the readers need to know. It's easy to say that a character is angry but how that character expresses the anger shows his/her personality. >Vocabulary This is a struggle. I know I do. I would go back and see I used a word mutliple times in one chapter. Learning more about vocabulary is a must. Thesaurus helps. Haha. And that's it. That was longer than I thought it was gonna be. Sorry ^^" I didn't read that far into the story. It's in my library though so I'll look forward to how you'll polish it. Have a good day!

Well I don't really like out of the world things like magic and stuffs but I must I really liked your novel so far. Haven't read all the available chapters but I am sure, I am definitely going to do it. Thank you for making me think even these paranormal things could be interesting too. Good work.

Thank you, author-sama for this novel..i really recommend this novel to people who like read...the characters in this novel is really great..😁😁😁😁😁hope author-sama can finish this novel..i can't wait😣😣😣😣

As a romance lover, this is a very good novel. I love those dark and possessive type of ML. Also, I noticed some grammar and tense mistakes but it's not much. Just do some proofreading. So far I'm liking the story author, you've got me captivated heheheh!

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So far it's really cute in a NSFW way. It could use editing, but I would be willing to to edit it cause the story is really good. Thank you author for letting us read your work!

I'm enjoying reading this so far. The biggest issue would probably be grammar and spelling. I see you have started editing your work, the edited chapters are much better than the unedited ones but if you have time i'd advice you go through them once again. So far, the actual Sarah is still a mystery and i'm looking forward to how Tereza is going to continue living her life in her shadow. All in all, the story has a lot of potential.

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It's a really interesting transmigration novel about with plenty of fluff and romance if that's your cup of tea. Won't spoil anything for anyone, so I'll just say, go for the love! Possessive ML and strong FL! There are grammar errors, but you can understand what the author is trying to say. Well, keep it up author! It's a pretty good romance.