(No spoilers) So hear me out.. The story has a past/present perspective which is something I am not very familiar with. But even though it may be confusing in some areas, I really enjoyed reading it. My third romance novel, so I be considered an expert in this field. BUT AUTHOR! We need to spice it up! Its...its to superficial :( I really liked the twists made between mc and the lover, and there are some parts which just had me laughing like some idiots, the problem lies in the weak romantic aspects! Grammar is good, and I see you kept improving along the way(which is a huge plus in my book) however, there is something I always share with other authors. And that is to always strive to improve your vocabulary! It really increases the diversity of the story, and would help you with cac description and development. Character design is on.the high end in my list, but vocab is a must! :) Stability of updates are hella good. So I'll give you some extra starts there. Overal, I would give you a 4.5/5 But yeah, here's a 5/5 for helping bring some diversity to my library😂 keep it up!
Luna1777
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LIKEI felt I should add some romance later on in my story. And "what better way to get some proper knowledge about such than from a real romance novel" was what I thought😂 But yeah, they definitely got us into romance😂 May we not stray further from the path set for us by buddah 🙏🙏🙏
SouthToiletWizard:These girls are making us read romance its sad to see how far we've fallen rice...
It was supposed to say "I may not be an expert in this field". Didn't see my mistake before now, thanks for spotting it!
squidsquish:Only 3rd and you call yourself expert? Take a hike.