Windreader8675
🌼 A fellow reader (me) is here to review with a yellow flower~ The characters are amazing and they made me laugh in certain ways each of their personality. I like the female lead Dilireba, she is sweet and a bit of bold. For her love interest Deng Lun, he needs to chill when he comes around the FL. 😂 Personally, there are alot of dialogues (and I think three authors breaks into the story?) which sometimes don't know who is speaking but if you read as it goes in a normal speed, then tracking the character who talks isn't be a issue. So for the author's writing quality, keep it up and practice more. 👍🏻 Story development ✅ Characters Design ✅ World Background ✅ Readers, go add this to your library! Don't miss out this book! 😊 Keep writing and go fighting~ ✍🏻💪🏻 Kudos to the Author! 😘 - Yuuchan A reader, friend and author ("Time Walking On Memory") 🕜
This is a very interesting read. As with the description, this is a fantasy romance novel. Firstly, the writing is of good quality. The phrases and sentences are well written in a way that doesn't affect the flow of the book. Only thing I can say is with the ocassional mix of present tense with past tense outside the dialogue box. This can be a bit confusing. Apart from this, great quality. Secondly, the characters are well defined to their roles. They are pretty much relatable, especially the ML who I find so much interesting. Thirdly, the woldbuilding started as some sort of contemporary romance but later involved elements of fantasy romance. A very good romance world either way. Fourthly, the storyline is really developing nicely. The romance between the FL and ML is quite hilarious despite the ML being a jealous type. I will see how the story develops in the future. And lastly, the updates. I don't fault any writer based on the rate of updates as I'm also a writer. Keep up the good work, my fellow writer.
This story had been a fun read! If you’re into romance and drama definitely give this story a shot. The chapters are either fun, intriguing or full of heart-throbbing moments or introduce new, interesting obstacles that the MC must overcome. While the story begins as a contemporary romance, there are some interesting fantasy elements thrown in later on, which will make the story more enigmatic and exciting to the reader.