TomVanDyke
Nothing stands out at the moment not sure why everyone's hyping it up. World setting seeming more like insignificant filler atm. Nothings happened and seems generic poor person from far away finds old teacher and learns he has mysterious powers people want to capture him for WOOOOW. This is so original you should copyright it. Just started the novel so I may be wrong but just wanted to give in unbiased opinion coz the comments seem fake as **** at the moment.