Coven Of Witch Craft

My advice is to place characters talking into a separate line on its own. If you clutter your writing with people talking, it’s harder to understand. Use this to contrast your writing: “What do you mean you don’t understand!?” “I don’t get why you would slam a bunch of dialogue into scenic descriptions!!!” You also have minor mistakes in punctuation and grammar. While not the most important, bad writing quality discourages readers from reading. Although, what’s the most important things to readers here? The amount of chapters of at least 2000 words each you can pump out while maintaining progression in your story and not babying your characters! Readers always demand more and better quality... Good luck writing!