i freaking love this novel! action packed! no rest! asskicking! at all times!
reccommended x100 please more. .............................................................
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I generally like the story is just that the update stability is to slow and also, I wish we could get a mass release like other novels. But in all de story development is very nice. Keep it up author and please we need lots of mass release so that we can vote for ur novel.. đđ
nice story so far.
MC live up to his name. its amazing how he face palm others.i won't say more about it or i might spoil it for other.
just need some editing, otherwise everything is great.
It has a really good depth to it. You may need to fill in the gaps with regards to the setting and the flow, but overall it draws you in as you read on.
I like how the setting showed the depth of the context through descriptions and narrations. There were some grammatical errors and I feel like punctuations are needed in few places. Character development is also pretty good.
Can see the author's skill improving in the recent chapters.
The world building has a consistent feel.
The progression to the latest setting made me feel more comfortable with the series.
Good luck!
Looks great so far, some small grammatical issues and rushed story but it's interesting and the story is going in a good direction. Hope you would more and longer chapters :)
Interesting story so far. Character development is good, writing is good and proficient and background is well developed. Hooks in the readers interest interestingly. Waiting for new chapters eagerly. Keep writing đ
I will check out later the rest of the story. It seems interesting. There are some grammar errors. I am sure you will correct them with time. As for the story, I will continue reading when time lets me and update the review.