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Second Chance War

Hokobishu

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LWEndless
LWEndlessLv4LWEndless

A great start, full of authentic detail, to an intentive take on the alternative history genre. Worth a read for anyone interested in World War 2.

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Hokobishu
HokobishuAuthorHokobishu

Shameless review! This story may be for you if you are looking for a novel with: a) No magic b) The grittiness and horror of war c) Reliving the greatest war in our history d) Nazi experiments e) Hitler riding a Saber-tooth Tiger on his birthday f) Skipping E because it sounds dumb If any of these appeal to you, this might be the right novel for you! Multiple chapter releases every weekend, I try to write a chapter per day on the weekdays! Instant contact with the author! There are several ways to contact me and I always reply to my comments!

MerielDaMery
MerielDaMeryLv5MerielDaMery

Enough with this **** why hasn't this been reviewed more c'mon the concept of the story is great and historically grounded. Plus it's very realistic because no bull**** OP super powers just grit and gut mixed with skill. just try it .....""drops the mic"""......

WinterBud
WinterBudLv4WinterBud

GIVE IT A TRY, GOOD GOD, JUST READ A FEW PARAGRAPHS (and ignore the minor grammar misses, psst, author, install a Grammarly widget to help you edit before you publish, might also want to go back to all the chapters to iron out most of the kinks [e.g., please capitalize "german/y"], that would make this perfect) THE AUTHOR CLEARLY KNOWS WHAT HE'S DOING. My only gripe: I'm in love with Angela Merkel, and I really like what Germany has become 70+ years after WWII, so I guess being reminded of their horrible past makes me a little uncomfortable, but that's my problem as a reader. I have a similar problem with Japan's horrible actions against other nations in the past. I've only read up to chapter 3, but I'll def be reading on.

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

2 years... jajaja ⌚:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

ikoyo
ikoyoLv13ikoyo

Another nice chapter. The twist is in the MC lining up on the British commando. The British and Americans were allies in World War 2. Am kind of confused as to why they should be short at by their American allies.

ikoyo
ikoyoLv13ikoyo

Another great chapter. The author has delivered another masterpiece. Nice work. All your efforts are appreciated by readers like me. Please try to increase the frequency of releasing each chapter.

DeJeL
DeJeLLv15DeJeL

Reveal spoiler

DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmorLv5DamnPlotArmor

Amazing concept and story! Though, there are typos here and there, but it can be ignored because the story was so captivating. 140140140140

Celestial_monk
Celestial_monkLv4Celestial_monk

I like it...................................... i dont have nothing to say as i dont want people to seee my review before reading the novel.............................................................. Why are you still reading fuk off

ikoyo
ikoyoLv13ikoyo

Great work. Good knowledge of the Italian campaign. The author has a good grasp of military operations and the chain of command. The description of events are so vivid that i can literally picture the actions as they are unfolding. The use of suspense is wonderful. In fact a big kudos to the author and a bug thank you to web novel for giving the author the platform to express himself.

killermniko
killermnikoLv15killermniko

The story seems good. Having been around the Army, a few things in the story bothered me. Physical fitness training didn't get regulized till the late 1940s. Most draftees got little to no training at all and were shipped out. I guess I can chalk it up to the time traveling. My experience with "Army Leaders" suggest they would not change their ways from just a dcument, but that's just my opinion. Overall, I like how you presented creative training environments for the recruits. The story flows really well and descriptive conversation. The story has a grand objective and moving towards it. A definite must read for those interested in a twist on real life events. ------------------------------------------------ The writing done well. I found almost no mistakes. 5/5 You are regularly updating the novel and posted a new chapter frequently. 5/5 The story is going along very well. We know the goal and the motivation for the characters which is very important. 5/5 The main character is refreshing and has a sense of purpose to the story. 5/5 The only thing, I feel your story lacking good background descriptions. I've read quite a few diaries and retaleing of wars from POV books. The stories list so many details such as the smells, the sights, and the sounds. I think with a bit more descriptions you would have a fantastic story. 4/5 Either way, super exciting story. Best of luck to you author.

BoredPanda
BoredPandaLv3BoredPanda

GREAT CONCEPT!!! Writing Quality is really great, easily understandable sentences, wide range of vocabulary, it's amazing how you describe war scenes. Stability of Updates is also good, no complaints. Story Development is GREAT!! Going back in time, changing the course of events and how the war will result. Amazingly executed scenes. Character Design is great, soldiers in the war zone, how unique. World Background is also good. Overall, it's great. The first chapter already got me so hooked I can't stop reading. I'll be adding this on my Library and I hope this story will continue to the end.

leorichard2021_0515
leorichard2021_0515Lv1leorichard2021_0515

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sdoryfinder
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elizar1
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elizar1
elizar1Lv4elizar1

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Will_Caruso
Will_CarusoLv4Will_Caruso

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ikoyo
ikoyoLv13ikoyo

Nice work. This book should have been completed in this plate. It's so unfortunate that the author is taking his works somewhere else. I wish him the best of all life endeavors.

ikoyo
ikoyoLv13ikoyo

Another good one from the author. Keep them coming. We are here ready to recieve them. Thanks for making my day less boring. Am always on the watch for your next chapter.