Review Detail of WinterBud in Second Chance War
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GIVE IT A TRY, GOOD GOD, JUST READ A FEW PARAGRAPHS (and ignore the minor grammar misses, psst, author, install a Grammarly widget to help you edit before you publish, might also want to go back to all the chapters to iron out most of the kinks [e.g., please capitalize "german/y"], that would make this perfect) THE AUTHOR CLEARLY KNOWS WHAT HE'S DOING. My only gripe: I'm in love with Angela Merkel, and I really like what Germany has become 70+ years after WWII, so I guess being reminded of their horrible past makes me a little uncomfortable, but that's my problem as a reader. I have a similar problem with Japan's horrible actions against other nations in the past. I've only read up to chapter 3, but I'll def be reading on.
Second Chance War
Hokobishu
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I will. I'm actually gonna do rewrites for my own story too. I hope it works out. Good luck to you (and me)!
Hokobishu:Thanks for the review, that is fine praise, b uh t I think you might wanna go back and re read chapter one, I'm doing edits and rewrites this week. It's more immersive!
WinterBud:I will. I'm actually gonna do rewrites for my own story too. I hope it works out. Good luck to you (and me)!
I also just took a break lol. I'm building up a stockpile as *cough* buffer for... you know, what online writers have to deal with on the side. Hope THAT works out
Hokobishu:Lol how is your book coming along?
Just got over a major part of my illness so I am writing at least one chapter a day! The war started so it's seriously getting good.
WinterBud:I also just took a break lol. I'm building up a stockpile as *cough* buffer for... you know, what online writers have to deal with on the side. Hope THAT works out