Beauty Under the Moon
Website : qidian china Views : 17.84million Rating : 8.5(10) Chapters : 4700+approx Status :?? Word count : 4.83million author level : great No of works : 3 Disscussion : 102 Year started : 2016 Chinese title : 一胎二宝:亿万首席爱妻入骨 Guys my current favorite novel is "Beautiful Time With You". It's one of the best romance novels I ever read! I know many of you might be hesitating cuz it's Ye Fei Ye novel! I can understand that! But I promise you it's a very cute and prolly the funniest novel with like zero heart wrenching moments! Give it a try guys! MC is very and also super surprising thing is ML isn't a complete jerk! READ NOW!
I waited till we got past the chapter 100 as I wanted to be fair to the novel. However, despite me giving it a chance to develop and get better, it continued to frustrate my expectations. If you're coming here, looking for something similar to Full Marks Hidden Marriage, you might find it. Actually, you might find this novel similar to pretty much everything on this website. And it's not because it is cliche or generic (although it is): it's because the author seems to want to include every plot line from every webnovel ever. As a result, the story goes on and on and untangles on itself, to the point that you have no idea of what's happening anymore. The feeling is that we are getting more and more chapters that lead nowhere, that nothing happens to further progress on the story, that the ending is never coming. And it's no wonder it has over 4000 chapters, with how much nonsense this story - reminds me of a Brazilian expression, 'sausage-filling' - that is not even enjoyable. There are way too much characters, most of them alike, that you stop caring about who is who and whatever it is that they want. Oh yes, about the characters: not one of them is believable. And I'm not talking about being unrealistic (although, yes, they are! unbearably so!), I'm saying that they are just so bland and tasteless that you'll hardly actually like one of them - and it's not hate: you just don't care about them. Their description (always long, to the point of causing pain) and personalities are generic, just like any other character of any other novel - the heroin is so pure and gorgeous and talented, the hero is so rich and handsome and cool, the second male lead is so captivating, the villain is so evil and cruel that people rejoice when they fall down -, but it's always so exaggerated that I still wonder how the author thought it would be a good idea to include even more generic characters. "Oh, if you don't like it, just don't read it!" you might say. But sorry, I spent all of my energy stones on this novel until it was published. I had high expectations for it to be - even if not great - at least a decent story. But at this point, it's not just mediocre: it's plain bad. This review is not a flame, not a harsh criticism. The author could do a great job with the initial plot, and you can see that the main idea has future. However, as this is a translation, I have no means of reaching them. So, this is a vent - one of my greatest frustrations. If you're still thinking about reading it, this is my warning: don't. There are other cliche novels with better writing on this website. And you don't even have to look around too much to find them. (I might still check on this novel from time to time, just to see if it's getting back on track - God knows my early works are also pretty cringe-worthy - but so far, I wouldn't spend a single SS on One Birth Two Treasures)
First the male lead is annoying.. Fine he is overbearing but does he have to rape the female lead every time they come in contact?😤 Is that the way to express affection? He should have learnt from lu tangxiao, lu is rich and overbearing too but he treats ning xi well. Why is rape a sign of overbearingness? Second yuoyuo is pitiful, while the mother is being raped by the father the poor boy is left alone at home and the mothers doesn't even remember that she left a six year old child at home. The little guy had to mature at the age of six cuz the mother is so stupid, I mean the child cooks for the mother😕. So while the male lead is been mean the FL still has to fall in love with him anyways, after all its the plot. The FL is not actively working for anything, her character is slow it just involves her being bullied and then being raped at the end by the ML, she is overly weak I wonder how she survived till date (oh she is the FL she can't die).. Overall yuoyuo is still the best and the only reason m Still reading this, the kid is loveable.
This story is just a waste of power stones. Female lead is just so timid and useless n male lead is just like freaking psycho rapist. Too many thrash characters 80%of the characters are about male lead great discription, as he was some great person, but believe me he is the worst male lead I have ever seen. Have this author ever read about ltx from full marks hidden marriage n sei from I love u monster or lu quaing from young brother in law is now my husband, how foolish to make use ur readers power stones for reading about this monster n that useless girl. This story does not have or display any kind of respect for women **** these ****ty novels. WOMEN ARE NOT SOME THINGS, SHOW SOME RESPECT FOR GOD SAKE. No there are some stupid advance privelages WHAT A JOKE!!!
Awaiting the new licensed translations to catch up to prev trans. Typical orphan girl with CEO cum showbiz melodrama. Don't think too deeply and just read for entertainment. Youyou, FL's Son is such a cheat being a certified Mensa genius at age 6, but I simply adore him. He is the main reason I'm reading this story. Of all the little buns I've ever came across in various stories, Youyou is by far my favourite. His intelligence and situational awareness caused him to act mature beyond his age. He is burdened by the need to protect his Mother from harms way (incl his own father) as he recognises that his Mother is rather stupid and defenceless. His interaction/antics w other ppl other than his Mother is shocking and at times beyond hilarious, esp w his subordinate (love this character too)! I really feel so much for this multilayered character! Honestly this black bellied cutie will evoke your maternal instincts haha. I esp enjoyed the first face to face meeting he has w his Father, the ML at the hospital, so heartwarming! I can't say much for the ML and FL right now as there isn't much character growth as of c372. Though the smut is abundant and pretty good. Lol.