ihatemilk
AMAZING!!! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! I like the idea of an inheritence system really. Its like Boku no Hero Academia ya know, but kinda not like it. Hey, if you're looking for a good book to read on your time out, you should read this. But hey If ya want another good book to read you could go visit Twilight's Anthem, I heard its really good. Here's the link, https://***.webnovel.com/book/11393174005361105/Twilight's-Anthem
I really feel like giving this a 1 star, sigh... milk is good, you know; why would you hate milk? Okay seriously, this novel is great, have a read and don't miss out! It really stands out with a 1st person perspective, it's actually the first 1st person novel I've read on WN, and I admire the author for being unique in this junkyard of unoriginality. Grammar and spelling are on the high end of web novels, only a few mistakes here and there but nothing jarring. I heard there's an editor coming soon as well!
hmm. well then let me say this. i thought at the beginning that the story development seems good. the story is moving forward BUT!. when you thought the story is moving forward the author decides step back not just once but all of it . does the author not want the MC cultivate? . every chapter you read until 13 indicates that the author doesnt want the MC to cultivate. he gives problems to the MC which he doesnt want the MC to cultivate . like FATHER FORGOT TO TEACH MC CULTIVATION METHOD because he doesnt have talent? what logic is that? its like the father just speedway abandon his firstborn child. . 13 chapters in and we still dont know anything about the world. characters seems vague. its like the author doesnt want to explain those details. either lazy or doesnt care about it . >Inheritance System< . more like a curse. or useless. just think about it . even if theres no system the story can go on , because the systems is pretty much useless unless someone has a WISH for the MC. why not make it a WISHING SYSTEM. and yes. MISSION's those suck bigtime. MISSION's more like a HELPING SYSTEM from another novel. these stories intertwined each other and its redundant. so far so good . even without the system the story itself can go on . why make a system designed genre when you make the SYSTEM pretty much useless all the time.