M_A_Ilmi
Hello, guys author here. The first volume of the story will be about army building. In the second we will see territory building. Also, I would also like to say that I will sometimes change the pov to develop other characters. The release schedule will be two chapters, but as I'm going to school, it might drop to 1 chapter a day. Hope you read it and thanks
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Error in chapter 5, pointed out in comments. Poor update stability. Feels more like an informational book than a story... maybe try to incorporate any information you need to give in dialogue between characters with exception to ascetic descriptions.;,;. Positive Feedback: Nice plot concept, and you do develop your characters well despite your shortcomings. Personal Feedback: I thought you did decently well, however, this novel is not really my cup of tea, so I will not be continuing to read it... keep up the hard work.;,;.
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