Reviews of The Demon's Gate.
The Demon's Gate.
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The characters are totally unrealistic. I mean, every single one. MC saw his power used in the most sensible and correct way, decides to use it in the most silly way. Female lead hates murder and even seeing people hurt. The MC comes along, kidnaps her and forces her to kill people. She went along with the whole situation like nothing happened and even falls head over heels for him.... His parents are also uses, it would have been better if he was an orphan; seeing as they had no presence and were totally useless. Author also places dialogue wrongly; therefore the whole story flow is bad ( He would put it before a long set of actions, so the dialogue just feels out of place, while the reading what happens later is already ruined because you already created an image of what you thought happened.)
Great story so far, Sorry I was out for a bit but I haven't forgotten how great this story is. Since the first chapter till now it's been the greatest story that I've read since I've gotten on this app .I've read this and waited for this for so long that I can't not remember The Nine Heavens Demon God Yao Jun. I hope that the author completes and writes a new novel so that we can be even more entertained than we were in this one. I think we, your readers would all like for that to happen. I hope the author has good days and writes on to be even greater in the future. Like a cultivator, people, and all things... They are all to have a final rest but I hope the author can keep writing and fighting like Yao Jun to keep his readers entertained and satisfied. Thank you Author-san for not going away like all the others and I hope that you don't go away because I don't know what I would do without your stories. I like how you used your words and I've quoted some things here and there but over all you are the best. From a faithful reader I give my sincerest Thanks to you and your writing. βBeing deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage- Lao Tzu" A quote describing the things Yao Jun stands by and what he wants and what I hope doesn't end here. You inspire others with your words and you make other people feel better I thank you author again for writing this wonderful masterpiece.
I like you author but you need to learn that having a 50ch of drivel and useless mc is not ok Before around ch 48 the story was absolute trash and just skimming is good enough cause nothing of value is there at all, the only thing you could get from that is that mc is a ***** and fucking stupid yet he can endure alot That's it....
I LIKE IT!!! This story is interesting and while MC has an amazing power that doesn't mean that everything is on easy mode. The characters are interesting and everyone so far are already important members of the story. I am still a little worried. Surely Mr. Author, you won't kill his girlfriend for the ' Berserk demon god ' trope (clichΓ©) right??? Otherwise I would rather leave it as it is and keep my good impression... Additionally...his demonic beasts are they males or females?
Really good novel, better than a lot of novels out there, especially if you're into demon gods xD. if i didn't know it i wouldn't believe this is an original, really good word building, the character development could be a little smoother (just my opinion ) but it's still really good a better than most novels. Good cultivation concept, i really can't wait to find out more about it.
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Can someone explain the cultivation levels,author says 3 mortal earths 3 heavens 3 xiantian skies,in the chapter we see 0-10 levels then 1 grade ,i dont understand anything,author failed badly at explaining the cultivation levels in the novels.The note at the begining with cultivation levels should contain detailed explanation for reference,but in the first chapters all novels shoul;d have cultivation ranks introduced,author failed badly at it.
One of my early favorites in my library. This story has a great world view, a testament to the author's prolific imagination. The various worlds were described in substantial detail while the increase in the main character's strength and those of his cohorts was brought about gradually but in an even pace that will not bore. Some parts may be too gory and not suited for those with weak stomachs but it is what it is. I just wish that new chapters can be added at a faster pace.
I find myself loving and hating this novel, it feels bad really bad but like when bad thing happens before the good it gets better but then turn bad again, anyways love the gate thing hate his growing strong slowly, when will his beasts evolve. And why does the enemy get to have 5 gates or will the NC kill one gate and get their ability.
