Reviews of Eye of the Eclipse

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I have to say, I like your writing style. And you're able to capture the depth as well. I wish I could write as well as you. The storyline was interesting, a bit on the heavy side, but it was able to keep me occupied until the end. So that definitely meant something. Thanks for introducing this to me!

GREAT WRITING STYLE, grammar and word construction. Creativity wise, it's good too. Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :)

I'm going to go ahead and make a shameless 5* review the first.. Its my first novel so i would appreciate any and all feedback while trying to answer anything I've left out while being too vague etc. As I'm aiming for realistic reactions and personalities, there are switches in the mood from being serious to playful, as I think would be played out in the real relationship between young brothers with competitive attitudes. All in all, Happy reading!

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Pretty good story so far, very well written with decent descriptions, etc. Probably one of the better ones, in terms of grammar and spelling, on this site.