Review Detail of Delliiriium in Eye of the Eclipse

I'm going to go ahead and make a shameless 5* review the first.. Its my first novel so i would appreciate any and all feedback while trying to answer anything I've left out while being too vague etc. As I'm aiming for realistic reactions and personalities, there are switches in the mood from being serious to playful, as I think would be played out in the real relationship between young brothers with competitive attitudes. All in all, Happy reading!