Khaliif74
First, im not good in english, so sorry for that. Interesting story with unusual concept. Story about sport industry? I think this the first novel i read bout that. Usually it about the athlete or maybe coach or manager. Its fun to read different angle bout football. A little bit like the sims game, so it interesting because i love the game. Urgently need an editor though. Keep the good work, i will support you π
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The story is interesting. The plot are intriguing. The characters almost well fleshed out. The cons that I can only see is that a bit bad grammar, typos and confirmation on when it would be updated again.... Note: there are mention about flying car in the future (5 year from this present now), but the past technology is that still of ground bound car. So I wonder how the author would make this...
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Keep your good work πͺ Looking fo moreπ &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&β¬&β¬&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& π