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salmontym

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  • salmontym
    salmontym1mth
    Posted

    Slow update speed after chapter 10. Stories seems great, just needs to develop faster. Additionally, the world building with 15 chapters published is still minimal, not sure if this is intentional, but please tell us more.

    altalt
    Hunter in the Dark
    Sci-fi · Abdihakim_Salax
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  • salmontym
    salmontym8mth
    Posted

    Looks really engaging so far. Maybe a bit early but there is a slight lack in character description/design, but it could also just be because there is not much happening yet. I love space operas so i am looking forward to this. Keep up the good work

    altalt
    Hunter in the Dark
    Sci-fi · Abdihakim_Salax
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  • salmontym
    salmontym8mth
    Commented

    Nice start to what seems like an interesting story. I love military stories and i hope this one delivers. Please keep going. Thank you

    Ch 1 Only the Poor and their Children.
    altalt
    Hunter in the Dark
    Sci-fi · Abdihakim_Salax
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  • salmontym
    salmontym2yr
    Commented

    Thank you!

    Ch 167 Preparations for the Game against Molde
    altalt
    THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
    Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
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