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Reviews of Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS)

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Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS)

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NamedNil
NamedNilLv11NamedNil

Have been reading this since chapter 20 Just came out. Have been reading ever since loyaly with every update. Though the grammar might be a bit spotty at times, the great story that's being told more than makes up for that. If you want to read an exciting, original,, non clichรฉ story, you need tot have this in your library. Keep it Up author!. Sorry for my English, not native.

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Spriigan
SpriiganLv12Spriigan

Here's a really good story with likeable and developped character, good romance not dragged out over 400 chapters, the writing isn't always top notch but it doesn't hinder the reading at all, if you can get over it it is a really good story wich deserves to be at least top 30 imo

Marlbrough
MarlbroughLv11Marlbrough

Very enjoyable and great novel to spend time on. Sometimes development gets pretty slow or it may even feel boring, but trust me โ€” you will not regret if you continue reading. Author has pretty neat ideas regarding abilities, system function and world building which feels quite refreshing. Many side characters are pretty good written, many times I felt conflicted about them. Protagonists development doesn't seem off either. I didn't notice any potholes or inconsistences during my read.

Areslaw
AreslawLv13Areslaw

I'm an avid reader. Since pre-school I've been reading daily. Books, short stories, poems...and then I found fanfiction. I loved that I could find more stories with characters I already loved from their canon platform. There are days I find great story ideas, but the writers' skills and forethought were lacking. Thousands of dropped stories, thousands of abandoned ideas, thousands of just pure garbage from trolls or those just wanting to put an idea out there no matter how poor. When they improve it's a blessing, and a moment of quiet pride to see that growrg. But many don't, for various reasons. And then, once in awhile, you find a gem. Maybe it's just a glimmer, just a corner of a shine on a lump of coal. But after taking it, and carefully washing it, and polishing it, you realize you've found a truly beautiful and valuable thing. I've been here on Web novel for a few months now, and it's only now, with this fic, that I'm so immensely glad that I stayed and kept sifting through the coal of the many many stories on here. Yes, great ideas. Yes, wonderful storytelling. But they've just been failing to really keep me enthralled in the story. Because of translation issues, poor grammar, or just straight up using words incorrectly. It kinda takes you out of the story to even figure out what was just said. This fic may not be perfect, but it certainly has caused me to feel gratified that I stayed here, and excited to find more of such inspired writing. It's a great quality work that I'll happily keep following and eagerly look forward to everyday. And not to be morbid or depressing, but, in case we don't keep our health. Or life takes you away from writing. I just want you to understand and keep in mind. I'm grateful for your effort, and time, and diligence. Thank you for the story.

WiseRage
WiseRageLv6WiseRage

Well, to start off, I came across this novel by chance - I was browsing through the "newly updated" section, when I saw this one. The name sounded interesting, so I just decided to read the synopsis and I became even more intrigued after reading it. The plot is quite original and although the MC has a system it is one-of-a-kind. The writing style is also really interesting and unique. Unlike other novels, this one doesn't have a narrator - the story is always told from one of the characters' PoV. This is the first time I've seen this type of storytelling which means that either I've been living in a cave, or this type of storytelling is really rare. It has a lot of pros... but also some cons. This novel is in a dire need of an editor. There are a lot of grammar mistakes and stuff, but surprisingly I can still understand everything and I don't get annoyed by the mistakes if I try to ignore them, which is REALLY unusual for me. (I guess the story is too interesting for me, or something. ๐Ÿ˜‚) TL;DR: The story is really good. It has unique style of storytelling and interesting plot. However, it has a lot of grammar mistakes. But that can be overlooked. Imo, the pros outweigh the cons by a lot of times.

mefisto666
mefisto666Lv10mefisto666

This is a good story, with a good protagonist, a good development, a good background. At some point, the quality of the writing may fall, but nothing serious. From here I will make small spoilers, but only general information of the first chapters. First let's talk about the protagonist. The apparent MC gets a "system" type skill at the beginning, but only that (it also has a cold-minded trait, but it barely counts). Many will think that it begins being strong, or that its growth is fast, but it is not the case. Others will think that this story will be centered on adventure and action, but in reality the comedy part has equal or more importance. With saying that the real protagonist behind the scene is the cat I say everything. Let's continue with the story. We have a world, slightly more in the future than ours, where technology stops working due to a natural disaster. It is basically like modern society, with some futuristic elements (weapons). In some moments, information or explanations may be missing, but because the protagonists themselves do not have them, and over time they are resolved. Finally a comment about the development. It is true that the development is a bit slow, especially compared to the novel centered on action, due to the great importance given to personal interactions, and as I said before, it also focuses on comedy. This novel is not recommended for people who just want action and see who has the greatest power and the coolest plan, if not for the one who wants a well-developed novel with a good dose of humor.

Zantix
ZantixLv5Zantix

I just dont know why this history dont have a better ranking , is awesome if i would have something to say could be about the slow in history but itself is this the thing that make great

Abra_
Abra_Lv10Abra_

This story here is very good to read, the world is very interesting and it is better than 90% of other stories that have a system. The releases are constant and the chapters have ideal length.

Thebrokenpencil
ThebrokenpencilLv4Thebrokenpencil

A great work developing well. Looking forward for further chapters. The story is engaging. It's English is smooth and it's easy to read without a lot of grammatical errors usually seen.

matt00011
matt00011Lv10matt00011

This is honestly the best and I love the cat!!!!!!!!! My only problem is that there arenโ€™t more chapters!!!!!! So I highly recommend this story because the system isnโ€™t too OP and thereโ€™s a lot of character development and the plot is good, 10/10 would recommend!

XBryX
XBryXLv11XBryX

Great usage of a โ€œsystemโ€ thatโ€™s not really a system. If you like apocalyptic novels this one should be for you. It has Espers lol..................................................

Crazyrider
CrazyriderLv5Crazyrider

Here are 3 power stones for a good story. ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ AUTHOR-san please update faster....,.......................... ...........๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿ™Œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š ..............

SpiralRush
SpiralRushLv14SpiralRush

So far this novel has a lot of good potential. The chapters I read so far are entertaining and very unique. This is about a boy who received a system during a 'special' meteor shower while most people on the planet while does that survived gained special abilities.

Coldfire142
Coldfire142Lv15Coldfire142

The wait is getting a little long but I will continue to support this book because it is very well written. Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp

Kenlinvert_Z
Kenlinvert_ZLv1Kenlinvert_Z

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Heliard
HeliardLv14Heliard

For me the grammar is too horrible to be able to continue to read this nice story. I have reach chapter 28 and so far the style is too clumsy, present and past temps are mixed in every sentences, who speaks is not always clear... Sad, as the story and mechanics are nice. This story would be great with a mass reediting.

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14ProfessorofCulture

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ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14ProfessorofCulture

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Inioluwa_Bamidele
Inioluwa_BamideleLv4Inioluwa_Bamidele

A detailed world with powers that actually makes sense. Dhrh fhjf fnjf hfhr hrhr fjjfd hdhf hfhr jrh jfjf hfbf jrhr gjfj jffj jffj jffj jfjf fjjf jfjf

Inioluwa_Bamidele
Inioluwa_BamideleLv4Inioluwa_Bamidele

I like this story and the way the MC takes care of the people close to him. the idea of living in a new earth with powers is also very interesting. the mystery around the villain serves as a hook.