Adventures With a Reincarnated Bush

Different and refreshing compared to other reincarnation stories I've read . Grammar is decent and only needs slight tweaks , overall enjoyable .

Ah, such a beautiful story. Ahem. Sorry, got caught up with my worshipping. In any case, the writing quality is pretty good, thanks to the editor. There are still a few places in which grammer needs to be checked over though(but this is natural. Humans can't make everything perfect). Stability of Updates...hmm...for the most part, the updates are coming really well, just a few times couldn't meet the deadline(haha, better than good ol'sloth me) Everything else is just perfect! The way characters never appear the way they do, the growth of the children, and of course, our MC. It was hilarious reading the interaction of a plant and the demonic bull. XDXD I think the world background is great, and it actually sounds realistic, not just some bullcrud stuff being thrown at you. I find it is extremely easy to be hooked. I swear, it sounds just like those best-selling books. here I'm gonna boast my insignificant boast. I PUT IN THE 100TH POWERSTONE. SO PROUD OF MYSELF :D:D:D:D:D And that's about it. time to go back in my worship mode~

I truly love it. If there is word to define what I feel, I will say it's about freshness. This story reminds me about a RTW fanfiction about being reincarnated as rock and wielding magic, except this one actually have original framework so it has more materials to develop. The only concern that I have is the sentence structure, it might be some residual dialect of the author that makes me have some difficulties to get the nuance being implied. I also found some sentences/phrases that I believe can be shortened/rephrased and still retains its intent. The need of the editor is quite high for this work, nonetheless the story itself is amazing, it's a really great take on the way of plant's life. Do you know that, after reading this story, I did self reflection about our treatment over plant and animal... I will add this, you might add a chapter about cultivation jargon especially the power level, to clear some ideas