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Empress_Innocent

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Somebodyxoxo186
Somebodyxoxo186Lv10Somebodyxoxo186

Is it just me or does this story resemble Doomed To Be a Cannon Foddler too much?? The sequence of events and characters are so alike except the fact that doomed to be a cannon foddler was written well

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Rakshademon
RakshademonLv14Rakshademon

I’m sorry to do this, as I’m usually all for supporting original stories BUT I can totally see that practically 90% of your story is modeled off the book “Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder” (炮灰女配) by Whistling Night Rain (潇潇夜雨). You’ve tried to add your own plot twists to make it seem different but I’ve read all your chapters here to be sure and yes, you’ve basically ripped off most of the storyline from the original novel. I don’t want to be a tattletale or whatever but it’s just not right that you’re claiming this to be an original story when it’s not. 😕

Empress_Innocent
Empress_InnocentAuthorEmpress_Innocent

Hey, author here! I'm sorry if sometimes the chapters disappears. Sometimes the release order is wrong, so I wanted to make sure it's in order.

samchon25
samchon25Lv10samchon25

I'm not yet read the story and just see one review about this story similiar with 'doomed to be cannon fodder' i wont judge, but i think i will add this to my library first to see the plot, theres 32 chapter still ongoing so hope the plot will get better(?)

X_ALCHEMIST_X
X_ALCHEMIST_XLv5X_ALCHEMIST_X

I’m sorry about the bad review but I feel like this is just a less detailed version of doomed to be canon fodder. The characters , plot and everything else seems the same.

ReaderBug
ReaderBugLv6ReaderBug

Good one...!!!! Can be better..!!!!

Annejohn
AnnejohnLv10Annejohn

See every author have their own view of story...from other readers maybe this story are similar to the story you have read before but for my view this is still have it own remark and remarkable story.😍

lilyofthevalley143
lilyofthevalley143Lv11lilyofthevalley143

It was good I love the synopsis but the story is confusing. It didn't give much details on how and why it happened this way. You had to guess and of you don't have extensive background on isekai and reincarnation and world travelling and other stuff connected to this story you won't get it. Anyway that was a good one.

Daoist885323
Daoist885323Lv4Daoist885323

Its entertaining to read the story u wrote i hope you write more and more in deep but it's ok it's me happy to read some more stories it's helps past the time so thank you author for your hardwork

Zidaan
ZidaanLv3Zidaan

I like it so far.....let's continue to read.......how maybe different from other transmigration love story.... I hope to be romantic enough to read second time.

DesertPanda
DesertPandaLv13DesertPanda

Interesting read but not very original. I agree it reminds me of another novel. I like that this is a short read. I like that the chapters are not locked.

Ashii90
Ashii90Lv5Ashii90

Not a good novel totaly copy pasted..... no proper story development and character design.... flow of story is abrupt no contunuation at all 🙄🙄🙄

SupremeSwan
SupremeSwanLv4SupremeSwan

There are grammar mistakes for sure.. but, the story is good.. I think everyone can’t understand this.. people who already follow cultivation stories can understand

sorantonata
sorantonataLv12sorantonata

At first I am interested to read this story. But after a few chapter it start to feel like I am reading a slightly different but still the same "doomed to be a canon fooder". I love that story so i kinda felt disapointed when I read this story coz the opening is the same. Too much similarity. I don't know if it would develope into an original story ltr on.. I hope that the author could please think a way to change it into an original idea... or is this a fanfic crossover alternate universe genre😉

cencoredfujoshi
cencoredfujoshiLv3cencoredfujoshi

umm.. how should I say it but this is like the bad version of the DCF. story is all over the place, they are not connected at all and character design is halfassed and the plot is confusing. I don't know what you wanted to write but I didn't like this at all

Fisk_Rush
Fisk_RushLv6Fisk_Rush

is this stole for doomed to be a cannon fodder I just feel like it is , want an answer well the novel is kinda of sweet looking follow to again novel .

Fisk_Rush
Fisk_RushLv6Fisk_Rush

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for it kisses!!