Reviews of A New World
A New World
SlyOW
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
This story is about a prodigy from the Uchiha clan who was born before the second ninja war. Unfortunately it lacks in character development and is mainly a poorly thought out wishfulfillment novel. Writing quality: The author does not seem to know what paragraphs are. This combined with long sentences makes for a poor reading experience. The grammar and spelling are not that great either but passable at least. Story development: Shortened academy arc followed by the second ninja war. Standard stuff for naruto fanfictions. After the academy thee MC seems to just go rambo on everything he meets, no matter the matchups. Higher level opponent? GO IN FOR THE KILL! Heavily outnumbered? GO IN FOR THE KILLS! Anyone with less plot armor would be a corpse already, not to mention some victories make no sense with 2vs1000 fights happening and somehow being won solely because he's the MC. On top of that he somehow gets everyone's respect cause he's awesome and keeps winning fights he has no business winning. Wish fulfillment without actual good ideas or planning from the MC, he just jumps into everything and wins by pure plot armor. Stability of updates: Chapters are frequent. Characters: The MC is a prodigy who has the goal of becoming stronger. The character itself is incredibly 2D since the MC only cares for jumping into battles and gets angry when someone he knows is hurt and does not seem to have other traits. The side characters are cardboard cutouts as well, they are mentioned by name and ninja rank but do not seem to do anything besides telling the MC to care for his friends and fight enemies. There's no humour, interesting quotes or actually developed personalities to be found. World Background: Absolutely terrible. The entire ninja village structure of the second SHINOBI war has been changed to modern army structures, somehow the villages have at least 10x more shinobi than in canon. Just to enable the MC to go on huge killing sprees everything ninja has been destroyed for easy targets. It has changed a great world background into something that makes no sense instead of adding a unique twist. Either limit changes to a functional background or make sure the characters can use the changes to add an interesting spin to the story. In this case all we get is a loss of strategy and mindgames in exchange for unbelievable fights with tons of plot armor.
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I normally do not write a review for every book I enjoy and would like to recommend. I'm too scared that someone will think "how stupid is this person - its not even a review - look at the grammar" SOOOO i have great respect for anyone who is willing to write and publish on a site (original or translated they both take courage). Well. thank goodness everyone is not as scared as me! Otherwise, I would have missed out on a lot of enjoyable reading. Having said all that, I only write a review if my courage is sparked from too little good reviews or too many bad reviews on something I think is worth reading. This story falls into the "too little good reviews" category! I realize that it is only 6 chapters so far but its worth it to start reading and waiting for updates. Even among all the Naruto Fanfiction, it has its on awesome, unique approach and is exciting to read. I was pulled into the story and am now suffering waiting for updates. I have only discovered a love for fanfiction over the last week (mainly Narutoverse) and its thanks to stories like this one that keep me digging for more!
Its pretty bland. And the Mc is uninteresting. Woth awkward lines and moments.,....... .. ..... ...,.........................๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ
Dear Author : you should mass release chapters so that many readers will read this novel. most of the people would want to read novel with many chapters . some doesnt want to read novel with few chapters because they dont want to read hoping that it would be dropped... SO PLEASE RELEASE MORE>. FOR ME , even im only in chapter 2 . it got me hooked...
This novel always made me smile due to many grammatical errors I am not expecting it to be perfect however even the basic sentencing form nor the usage of words is wrong making my day seems bright :). The story is nice typical the story is from the Naruto world so no originality there OP MC getting arrogant along the way like your chinese webnovel because I am OP something like that, I am reading because it made me smile due to grammar errors but if you can take it I guess the story is nice just donโt expect that the MC is a great person the author made him a genius and resulting to arrogance heโs your typical chinese webnovel MC.
I won't comment too much on grammar and spelling which isn't good at all because it is the author's second language. I will just say that the writing pulls me out of the story very quickly. The story itself is only fine with the main character starting out as an overpowered genius. We don't see the character have any difficulties at all which reduces any interest. I personally don't recommend this story since there's entire sites filled with Naruto fanfiction, a decent amount of which is significantly better than this. I will admit I'm only writing this on the basis of the first 20 chapters and maybe the author improves a lot. But at the moment, I can't force myself to enjoy it.
I have read reviews of your fanfic, all of them are good. I just want to makes things clear, YOU NEED MASS CHAPTER UPDATE FOR YOUR NOVEL. Many people liked to read fiction that have many chapters with fast update chapter and unfortunately I was one of them. So, I want you to keeps writing and update the chapter faster than usual. Thanks
Honestly itโs mediocore at best. The story is also written really badly, not so badly that I couldnโt understand anything, but bad enough that it completely ruins the immersion and you donโt feel anything for the characters. The only reason I read it was because I was bored and it wasnโt very long/ only read it if you have nothing else to do(like literally nothing at all).
At first i didn't expect much from this work, but the more i read the more i'm being pulled into the story. You're really get a good naruto fanfic with so much potential here. Fromthe writing quality, it was actually can be categorized as well writen. Though, there are some part that maybe need to be fixed in my opinion. I observed that the author writing style consist more of description paragraphs than dialouge. For many maybe, it was not a problem at all. But i must say that it may make some peope get easily bored when reading. That being said, maybe increasing the dialouge between characther will be a good idea since it will make the story feel more alive. Beside it, overall it was really a nice work with interesting character, plot, and story idea. Thanks and keep the good work. :)
