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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of The Undead Legion

Deathbeckonzthee
DeathbeckonztheeLv14Deathbeckonzthee

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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BelowHeavens
BelowHeavensLv5BelowHeavens

That guy who stole his money better be dead after some chapters....

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Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv6Enlightened_Being

I have a question, does the female hire her bodyguard all a street thug or a professional bodyguard, If It's a professional bodyguard won't he know that the female the MC save has a very powerful background and will find out easily?, this here is a plot hole where you design the character without much thinking, characteristic design is one of the main concern in a novel where you just randomly right as you please without any logical meaning or reason, common sense.

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PassTheNoose
PassTheNooseLv6PassTheNoose

Loved the chapter mate. Only one question tho, why is the guy who kinda stole the money using guy instead of dude? Is it a quirk he has or...?

DaoistKaname
DaoistKanameLv15DaoistKaname

This is going to come back and bite you two in the ass!

Elvire
ElvireLv6Elvire

Wtf that guys who stole money,i hope he died

Senseisan
SenseisanLv12Senseisan

So the bodyguard is a addicted gambler, great background check great...

Neptune40
Neptune40Lv14Neptune40

Why can’t I read past first chapter

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Littledude14647
Littledude14647Lv4Littledude14647

car-kun strikes again

standinflamename
standinflamenameLv14standinflamename

Good writing, good story. Bad spelling. The spelling gets better later. The story stays really good! I’m up to about Ch. 180

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silverwolfcub
silverwolfcubLv4silverwolfcub

I'm happy to see your story so high up in the ranks!

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AdrianFoster
AdrianFosterLv4AdrianFoster

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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ujgng
ujgngLv4ujgng

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Kamekona
KamekonaLv11Kamekona

My favorite introduction to a novel thus far, though the translation was kinda off, I like the background story

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Ulcis
UlcisLv11Ulcis

Hmm, interesting. :)

LittleWanderer
LittleWandererLv3LittleWanderer

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Andrew_Kohnke
Andrew_KohnkeLv15Andrew_Kohnke

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

Andrew_Kohnke
Andrew_KohnkeLv15Andrew_Kohnke

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

v1ne
v1neLv12v1ne

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

dunce
dunceLv4dunce

good

Elden_McIver
Elden_McIverLv3Elden_McIver

Decent start