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Rotten Fujoshi PS: *for y'all fckers who can't stomach my story comments, i won't bother replying to every single one of you but you're more than welcome to visit my profile and receive this *eyeroll*
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v1ne7mthCommentedCh 1 The Day of Awakening- v1ne7mthCommentedCh 370 Safe at the Leisure Guild
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or rather you take some memory enhancements? hhhhhhhh
With a smirk, Alaric responded, "Become a man whose name is worth remembering." - v1ne7mthCommented
how dare you
'These idiots are slow, weak, and barely acidic. They can't even evolve further than rank-1!' - v1ne7mthCommented
The pov in the way of writing jumps from Third Person to First Person and it doesn't sound good.
Even though he had lost all his money in a scam Young Wyatt's parents had left him a good amount of property for example the house I am currently in and their silver rank adventure equipment. - v1ne8mthCommentedShe was able to kick onto the ground and swim to the top. She started swimming to the side and got out of the pool. Once she did, she lay on the side of the pool and went back to her sleep.
- v1ne8mthCommentedHe could sense things even though he couldn't see them physically. He could sense that Daphne was in the other room and could even feel the aura in her body to some extent. The difference between the 1st Star and the 2nd Star was immense.
- v1ne8mthCommentedHe looked around to look for where he could see someone to sell his horn. He finally saw a corner where the plaque said [Appraisal Counter]. He walked up to it, hoping they would look at his horn.
- v1ne8mthCommentedCh 20 Magical Beast
- v1ne8mthCommented"It must have been the blood." He said to himself. The animals must have smelled it and kept a distance. But the blood means that the animal was injured.
- v1ne8mthCommentedHe suddenly started seeing the ground was a little unusual compared to normal. He noticed that the ground had a few blood spots tracing out a trail. He looked around and saw that the trail was leading from the Inner Forest. He bent down and touched the blood. It was still fresh.
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the ZomBeasts
"Aim for their eyes. They go down if you can reach their brains." - v1ne8mthCommentedInspiration
- v1ne8mthCommentedLeo's eyes lost their gleam instantly. Valkyr's Forest was the forest bordering Solhaven, the city they were in. It was full of dangerous monsters that could rip adults to shreds. Moreover, there were some beasts that could even use magic called magical beasts. He would become food for these beasts instantly.
- v1ne1yrReplied to HavocHUN'First important point, temples are always built with many false turns and dead end pathways. Second important point, guns from this time period can only fire once as long as I don't give them time to reload. Third important point, my ability is a sensory type, I'll do better in the dark than they can.'
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where is the *SMIRK*?
Kant nodded slightly. There was a smile on his smile. - v1ne1yrCommented
i feel liek im getting dumber the more i read
All of that could be brought immediately to reality, just like how the Council Hall had materialized right before him the night before.