Lord_HaarT
First of all, it sucks that you didn't explain the world more, although yes you explained about the hiearchy system and thats it! You didn't even explain in detail if there is magic or simalr thing! There is a 'identification stone' and the first thing I thought I you would do is make MC learn about this kind of stuff better and the world he got in better but no you write many chapters with MC having s** like wtf dude the title is even culinary but the first thing you focused on is MC and his love interests being intimate not cooking not food and not searching for more information and the MC is an idiot - its okay to tell about business strategies and law and policies to the baron, his father but production of new products, the f*** you should just have the MC make a new company (although the territory is having a crisis roght now they are still a baron they must have savings and such also there is the thing called an investment), this will make the MC and his family prosper more, remeber that the territory is not entirely their own but the kingdom they are in.... If they have a family company they will not just make the family prosper but also the economy of the territory, it will become the specialty of the territory more visitors more people more money and more merchant will invest in the territory for potential and competition.... Also is it quite a norm for MC to check their status first or this MC is just a UNIQUE DUMBA** and the author H****!!! Im excited at first because there is a gourmet novel again for me to read but its just a SE* novel at most in the chapters until now BTW there is another novel using the same character name as this MC with the same type of novel which is gourmet (lol I don't know if this is gourmet because the first 21 chapters but cooking dishes is not even properly mentioned or it is nit ipmentioned even), hope you will improve and also I advise you that upyou get an editor if ever you pursue this nove!!!!!
Apologize for giving bad review.. i juz dont like the part with harem...the MC that u build come from nble fmly i didnt expect u to develop him into *** maniac.. (my impression after reading a few chptrs) other than that its good....(already finish reading all chptrs u wrote).... my first thought after seeing the MC bcming *** maniac : "the author must love reading manga" ... well i know this is ur harwork but still to see a man easily seduce by ***, it juz dnt live up to his status as a nble man... π ...lastly the reason y i read this nvel bcz i see it related to food... thnx for ur hrdwork n i think i will juz drop this nvel...gud luck in ur writing!
its ok the cooking vibe and the other cooking if you know what i mean π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€π€€ πππππππππππππππππππ πππππππππππππππππππ
this actually good original isekai novel but its look like author abandoned this novel because live matter and you can only read some new chapter on his patre page. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
dropped chapter 2 only because I found the very minor errors unbearable I have read from machine translation websites and my mind can filter the mistakes out, for some reason I couldn't do it with this first chapter decent start, found that his father is a blacksmith unbelievable due to it being a dying trade wondering why he is cheerful finding mushrooms without explaining why he can differentiate the poisonous ones from the others annoyed author had MC took a portable stove and not a flint striker for barbeque far more useful annoyed MC took his phone but didn't take a solar power charger