Old_Skin
Well, I really like hunterxhunter, and I find it sad that not so many persons write fanfiction about it. The story good so far (13 chapter), and the MC isn't totaly a cheat for now. I hope the autor can balance the MC power with the world he's in since if he doesn't the story will probably go to fast to really enjoy it.
Please proofread your chapters. I often find extremely ****** grammatical errors like writing "wad" instead of "was" or "sigthed" instead of "sighed". These errors are much too ****** and could easily be fixed with little to no effort, all you need to do is proofread your chapters after writing them. Other than your grammatical errors the rest of the story is fine.
I just read the first couple of chapters and did not like it. The Mc said he wanted to be born at the same time as Gon but the author just skips over that and he is some age idk. Then five years pass randomly and I still don’t know how old he is or where the DUCK he is. Also there were a couple sentences that just made no sense
I want to give it a one star but I won’t since i only read a couple of chapters sorry if you don’t like that. The main attraction for the hunter x hunter world is it’s nen power as it’s just so versatile and can become extremely powerful if trained well and till now we have no idea how powerful one could get if he got to end on the path of nen. And for you to just throw that away for bleach powers is super disappointing to me as I honestly haven’t seen enough or any one who was actually interested in nen despite how incredible it is. Oh and a lot of reviewers say that your fanfic is full of grammatical mistakes which means that you’re super lazy to review your chapters which doesn’t bode well for the future of this fanfic so that’s another problem you should put in mind.