Reviews of The Beginning After The End 1
The Beginning After The End 1
TurtleMe93
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Please ignore my star rating (>_<) Hello, I go by TurtleMe! I wanted to try my old hands at being hip and posting TBATE on webnovel as well. For everyone who already knows me, I hope you you're as nice to me here as you all were on Gravity Tales. I've been writing this novel for almost three years now so I pray that you enjoy this little world I've created. While updates will vary on this platform, I can promise you that I won't drop this novel. Hope to see you all in the comment sections.
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Lets start with - this is a perfect story for an average reader, a fantastic novel for people who like positive and magical story with little to zero reality in it. Fortune, fame and riches follow our hero litteraly from birth, and never stops. It is also well writen with great detail and no real filler text. If that is what you like then this book is a must read for you! On the other hand if you are looking for a dark fantasy, a strungle with ups and downs, cruelty and blood, challenges and sacrifices or atleast some realistic interaction in a fantasy setting then scroll by, this novel has nothing of the sort.
Mediorcre story with greedy writer. Some parts of the beginning chapters don't sit well with the after parts of the story, making it controversial and frustrating while reading. The author tries to hook up some reader by placing some of the chapter here in webnovel. But when it gathered some readers, the author put it down so that readers have to buy most of the chapter from his own page. Good move, and good luck doing that with this just above average novel. Hope you get rich soon, turtle
The Cover brought me here. One of the best Novels I’ve read on this site. Typical tropes executed right! And the writing looks very proffesional leaving me in awe. [So far] I have yet to be disappointed, sure there might be some flaws here and there but very small. My only hope it doesn’t go polygamy route but the Author seems to only focus on one single girl which makes me very happy. Unlike most of the time where girls fall in love because MC is powerful or handsome. Tessa falls in love due to his personality and she does her best to grow stronger. No matter how little or small, I love that there’s a lot of character development for almost everyone. Decent world building. Love the OP. I really don’t like the Human King. I hope to see MC abnormal presence change things. It’s kinda weird how MC instantly became buddy-buddy with former distasteful characters
Have you ever wondered how the f*ck does this guy even become strong enough to be a king?, I Know his strong and all but seriously you need more than strength to be a king but he lacks everything even battle sense that i'm getting fed up, he's emotionally weak and ***** while at the same time childish(No wonder he's just a figurehead and a puppet), the main character is a king in his past life who meets with a lot of influential people who are cunning and devious enough with lots of experience, even the author explains the protagonist having a good judgement of character... but seriously... What the actual f*ck is this?, Main character got f*cked by some snobbish arrogant f*ck with a peanut brain, even saving him ... got his whole team killed by going on an expedition that wipes out half of his party while getting hit in a fireball in the face while the jackass escapes, a push over and an arrogant bastard, he almost died 2 times but his mentality didn't change, first one was the bandit ambush which he got luckily saved by some op character giving him op abilities, second would be him getting betrayed but his plot armor saved him because it explains his master that it took him atleast 10 years to even keep his stage 2 form hour, while the main character haven't even trained in it, activated it for even a minute... his heroic personality or selfless personality keeps him in danger all the time... Foolish and Justice seeking bastard with an arrogant view of everything else, Anyway the story is full of fillers as well, useless **** that makes you wanna skip the whole chapter up, Story Development? Slow... so 2 tars, Character Design... PFTTT!! 2 star, 1 star because of the heroine growth, World background good but too many unnecessary fillers 4 Star, Writing Quality 5 Stars for obvious reasons, Stability of Updates 4 Star, search and and found out about the other 160+ Chapters, Anyway the main character is mostly my focal point and why most of my stars are low since for me %80 should be a favorable MC not some f*cker making mistake like 2 times and getting himself almost killed.
Alright so I wanted to read this book for quite some time and I checked many apps and sites but I wanted to find the official site where the author was posting chapters and finally found this but from what I can gather from recent reviews and comments, the author has moved the story? Can anyone tell me for sure where as this is one my most favourite stories and I really want to read it at the official site:O Also, the low rating is only because I cant find more chapters here. Otherwise its be 4.something outta 5
