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Review Detail of LanceG in The Beginning After The End 1

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Have you ever wondered how the f*ck does this guy even become strong enough to be a king?, I Know his strong and all but seriously you need more than strength to be a king but he lacks everything even battle sense that i'm getting fed up, he's emotionally weak and ***** while at the same time childish(No wonder he's just a figurehead and a puppet), the main character is a king in his past life who meets with a lot of influential people who are cunning and devious enough with lots of experience, even the author explains the protagonist having a good judgement of character... but seriously... What the actual f*ck is this?, Main character got f*cked by some snobbish arrogant f*ck with a peanut brain, even saving him ... got his whole team killed by going on an expedition that wipes out half of his party while getting hit in a fireball in the face while the jackass escapes, a push over and an arrogant bastard, he almost died 2 times but his mentality didn't change, first one was the bandit ambush which he got luckily saved by some op character giving him op abilities, second would be him getting betrayed but his plot armor saved him because it explains his master that it took him atleast 10 years to even keep his stage 2 form hour, while the main character haven't even trained in it, activated it for even a minute... his heroic personality or selfless personality keeps him in danger all the time... Foolish and Justice seeking bastard with an arrogant view of everything else, Anyway the story is full of fillers as well, useless **** that makes you wanna skip the whole chapter up, Story Development? Slow... so 2 tars, Character Design... PFTTT!! 2 star, 1 star because of the heroine growth, World background good but too many unnecessary fillers 4 Star, Writing Quality 5 Stars for obvious reasons, Stability of Updates 4 Star, search and and found out about the other 160+ Chapters, Anyway the main character is mostly my focal point and why most of my stars are low since for me %80 should be a favorable MC not some f*cker making mistake like 2 times and getting himself almost killed.

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The Beginning After The End 1

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