Reviews of Golden Cucumber

Firstly, I'm an author so I'm biased toward my own story. I think this story has a unique background and plotline. As for the grammar, truthfully it still sucks, so please bear with me for now. I'm still searching for editor/proof-reader. The tags for this story are time travel, reincarnation, transmigration, fantasy, magic, and slow-burn romance. Lastly, thank you to you who vote this story.

I think the plot and the background of this world you've created is really interesting. The only problem I have with this is the grammar and wording, I could understand what you were trying to say but some sentences didn't make much sense. But I know you're aware of this since you've written that you're looking for an editor. I think as long as you sort our the grammar and wording, this will be a really interesting novel. I hope your release more chapters. x

Thank you for conveying your ideas into this story. I wish you to find your editor soon and helping you to edit every chapter of yours. Is the Jagger boy one of the ML?

One word: UNIQUE. The slow-burn romance fiction is a thing that I always wait for. Please update more chapter or maybe you can do a mass release ;p.

Your idea of this story is interesting, a teenager transmigrated into a newborn in the pre-technological era. I think the last chapter's grammar is better than the previous one.

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The magical world is my favorite world setting. I'm not a native, so I don't know which one is wrong in your grammar. Your MC and I have an affinity in personality lol.

never thought someone would write a story with Indonesian myth, but not gonna lie, it's good. recommended for u to read. great storyline. need moarrrrrrrr UPDATEEEEESSSSSS LOVE U AUTHORRRRRRRRRR AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: Your second and third chapters feel a bit short, are they at-least 1.5k words long? That's what I'm used to... 1.5k-2.5k.;,;. the MC's character has not been built as much as most web novels have by this point, hopefully, you show more of her character soon.;,;. *side note: You said 3 chapters per week, and it's been a full week since your last update?* Positive Feedback: Good plot, I see no grammatical errors (whether or not they exist), I love the way you built the MC. this world is built as well as it needs to be as of yet, but more information will be needed as the MC gets older.;,;. Personal Feedback: I really enjoyed the story and how you wrote the MC.;,;. Tho the chapters feel short to me, I will continue this story at a later date, I hope you write until completion.;,;.