Review Detail of M_Lexi in Golden Cucumber

I think the plot and the background of this world you've created is really interesting. The only problem I have with this is the grammar and wording, I could understand what you were trying to say but some sentences didn't make much sense. But I know you're aware of this since you've written that you're looking for an editor. I think as long as you sort our the grammar and wording, this will be a really interesting novel. I hope your release more chapters. x