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I really enjoyed the first story arc. It's only 11 chapters long, but even a lot of small plot points and twists happen, the pacing feels right and it's not rushed. The characters are interesting, realistic and relatable. There are a lot of tropes and clichés, but the way they are handled is interesting (in a normal use, not a parody or deconstruction). We can feel the touch of the author: original aspects are added to the clichés. For example: the magic school environment, which is pretty common and I'm usually not really fond of, I found that thos magic school had its own charm in its atmosphere. This is also due to the prism of the protagonist: we discover it through his eyes with the writing in the first person. There are no info dumps as long paragraphs of explanation or description: the exposition and worldbulding is merged with the actions, thoughts and dialogs of the characters. The plot and jokes (which are well integrated) makes the reading enjoyable and never feels dull. The protagonist has a nice personality, he doesn't incompetent or annoying. Also he isn't OP, on the contrary he's more in a unfavorable situation. In a nutshell, the author's narration, characters and worldbulding are remarkably well done. Even if the story is cliché it is enjoyable and fresh. The novel is accessible to everybody (not complex, niche or experimental). Even if you're sick of isekai and magic school stories, you may appreciate this one. I look foward to reading more and hope that the quality level won't drop.
I love your writing very much Storyline is very good. V-3 is well written .And our MC is quite good too Among the volume ,i like v-3 most. If u try to post this novel in another jap novel site . It will get popular.keep it up and best of luck. (Plz forgive me if i make any mistake in my english .i am not so good in english)
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