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  • DarkBlack
    DarkBlack1yr
    Commented

    Stick with the names if you can't figure out when/how to use the proper pronoun unless the characters are written to be able to shape-shift at will it is very frustrating as a reader to constantly have to correct inconsistencies as you read a story. The immersion of the story becomes jagged and broken, thereby interrupting the natural flow and causing irritation.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Mythological advancement
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    Online Game: Bugged Talent Unlimited Growth
    Games · Gori
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  • DarkBlack
    DarkBlack2yr
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    A ring to control the green power of will oops I mean fire... yeah

    Or he could imitate the shape of a weapon, such as a fire knife, a rocket, a fire sword, a firearm, and so on.
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    Digging to Survive: I Can See Hints
    Sci-fi · Sword Old Wolf
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  • DarkBlack
    DarkBlack2yr
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    inheritor of the system

    "The inhibitor."
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    I Can Track Everything
    Eastern · Sanmao Wu
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  • DarkBlack
    DarkBlack3yr
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    truck-kun a reliable one way transdimensional transport(no-refunds)

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Physics The Greatest Magic
    Fantasy · Renovator
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