The premise, synopsis, story needs a little spazam, you know what I mean. I can understand that it's good all in all, I recommend this book, It's fun and easy to read, good luck author, Kudos to you!
stories was good, just need to polish a little in every aspect. don't give up and keep writing till story end. as long as not stop in midway, then there is a change to be shine.
The book seems promising and I love that characters.. I'm not being critic tho but it kind of needs like some polishing, kind of But other than that its amazing ❤❤
