Master_of_Mana
Well what can I do except be shameless and give myself Five stars. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Honestly I couldn't get past a the first few chapters, not because the story is bad, no the storyline you have chosen to follow within blackclover is decidedly average. No the reason why this fic is bad is because of your terrible grammar and spelling : commas in the rong places, getting the tenses of the verbs rong, messing up the sentence construction between plural and singular and having a overall bad vocabulary.
Honestly Iβve enjoyed this fan fic. However there are errors and things that make this fan fic decidedly only decent. The grammer is bad but it gets better throughout. The storyline is average but I enjoy how the author stuck to the original plot for the most part and didnβt add some bs lame plot. The mc isnβt very appealing to readers, he is a more mature version of asta. Idk if thatβs what the author was going for but it makes the character meh. The loud crass behavior around yuno Isnβt it for me. He is witty when he flirts which I enjoy but in aspects of life and fights he doesnβt use that wit. I feel like the power scaling has been dramatically stretched so the mc has more to grow to keep the story from ending to early. There are a few chapters that are just so slow and lame that itβs hard to read. The system the mc has is also confusing and overly ominous for no reason. Iβm sorry for rambling without a clear order but I just typed as I thought so Iβm really sorry.
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