Review Detail of Pilotfranco in (On rewrite) In Black Clover With Anti-Magic System

Honestly I’ve enjoyed this fan fic. However there are errors and things that make this fan fic decidedly only decent. The grammer is bad but it gets better throughout. The storyline is average but I enjoy how the author stuck to the original plot for the most part and didn’t add some bs lame plot. The mc isn’t very appealing to readers, he is a more mature version of asta. Idk if that’s what the author was going for but it makes the character meh. The loud crass behavior around yuno Isn’t it for me. He is witty when he flirts which I enjoy but in aspects of life and fights he doesn’t use that wit. I feel like the power scaling has been dramatically stretched so the mc has more to grow to keep the story from ending to early. There are a few chapters that are just so slow and lame that it’s hard to read. The system the mc has is also confusing and overly ominous for no reason. I’m sorry for rambling without a clear order but I just typed as I thought so I’m really sorry.