Aysel_Inara
LADIES AND GENTLE READERS OF WEBNOVEL! I must tell you, your author knows what she's doing. The right amount of suspense was given with the right amount of information to draw you in. I think im falling in love Words of advice as you keep moving slow down and give more information on certain parts. Let us sync more into your characters feelings. Honestly we aren't going anywhere
The quality of your chapters are pretty good, it does keep my interest for a bit and I would enjoy reading some more, The development of your story seems good so far but I would like it if you could add a bit more detail to the character surrounds so it would make it much easier to picture in my mind. The same goes for some of your characters it would be nice to describe Mc more and the people that surround her.