Reviews of [Re written] Read Douluo Dalu: The Sovereign of Technology

I was really looking forward to this fanfiction as am really into doulou dalu universe. this story has alot of issues: 1-the mc has issues,he can't let go of his previous sh#tty life 2- the martial spirit.. even the author doesn't know how to explain the uses.author could have just given him a random spirit and it would have been better. 3- storyline.. its just sh#t

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

When i seen the title the beast king i thought he would be a beast himself but i was wrong hes not even a beast he just summons beast idk i just that type of power

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good so far has great potential so don't f#ck it up author-san and who are the harem candidates I need to know other than that good work keep it up

The story is really great right now. The plot is good and it feels like you have an idea of what to do, which is really good. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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