Reviews of [Destinies] Drafts

Quirky and upbeat characters, the story is a fun adventure through and through. This is a heartwarming wholesome story of two siblings that bring laughs and chuckles through their interactions. The author does extremely well to blend the worldbuilding with the events of the story allowing for a deep yet smooth ride.

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I like how the story flow. To me, this is a very good story. I only wish that the author updates more often and give us more chapters. Good luck author, may your book grow bigger.

Overall, it's pretty decent story,. Neat chapter format too. except that, chapter title make me a little bit confusing. like chapter 1 is chapter 0.

This is great. The novel flows fantastically and nothing seems awkward. It immerses you easily into caring about the main character and his new sibling quite well. Though, changing from " " to Badguy: hehe format was surprising to say the least. You're doing great!

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i like your writing style, it is simple and easy to read. The interactions between the characters are not forced but has a natural flow. I like the bickering between Fie and Damian. Keep it up!!!

hope to see morrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...........................................................