Comic and animation notice essay commentHere are some examples of comments on anime inspirations:
* * 1. Comprehension and explanation of the content **
1. * * Deep understanding of manga content **
- If the essay could deeply analyze the social phenomenon or human nature behind the comic, it could be commented: "This essay's interpretation of the comic is deep and thorough. It successfully uncovers the hidden meaning of the comic. Through the pictures, it can see the specific social phenomenon or human nature reflected behind it. It shows a strong insight."
- If the understanding was shallow, the comment would be: "My understanding of the comic is superficial. I only describe the general content of the comic and have not delved into the possible implications behind it [such as social meaning, moral enlightenment, etc.]. I need to further explore the meaning of the comic."
2. * * Accurately summarize the content of the comic **
- For essays that could clearly and accurately summarize the content of the manga: "When describing the content of the manga, the essay should be organized clearly and the details should be grasped properly. The key elements in the manga [such as characters, scenes, plots, etc.] should be accurately presented, laying a good foundation for the subsequent revelation."
- If the summary is biased or incomplete: "There were some mistakes in the summary of the comic's content. Some important elements [pointing out missing or wrong parts] were not mentioned or described inaccurately, affecting the presentation of the entire comic and the subsequent revelation."
3. * * Considering the actual situation, it is reasonable **
- When the essay could connect the inspiration of the comic with the reality of life: "The author cleverly combined the inspiration from the comic with the examples in life, such as [listing the examples mentioned in the text]. This connection is natural and close, making the inspiration of the comic have a strong practical significance and persuasiveness."
- If the connection is rigid or unreasonable: "Although I tried to connect the manga with the reality of life, the connection between the two is rather far-fetched.[Point out the illogical points], which does not reflect the revelation of the manga in life."
* * 2. Structure and logic **
1. * * Overall structural integrity **
- A well-structured essay: "The structure of the essay is complete. The introduction of the manga and a brief introduction of the content. The middle details the enlightenment obtained from the manga and its connection with reality. The end sums up the enlightenment or makes an appeal. The transition between the parts is natural and the hierarchy is clear."
- An essay with a poor structure: "There is a problem with the overall structure.[Point out the structural problems, such as the lack of introduction at the beginning, the hasty ending, etc.], resulting in the lack of cohesiveness of the essay and the inability to present a complete discussion process."
2. * * Logically coherent **
- A logically clear essay: "Logically coherent. From the interpretation of the comic to the revelation, to the connection with reality, every step of reasoning is rigorous and orderly.[Illustrate the logical cohesiveness], so that readers can easily understand the author's thoughts."
- An essay with chaotic logic: "The logic is relatively chaotic, and there is jumping thinking in the process of explanation.[Point out the performance of the chaotic logic, such as the contradiction between the front and back of the discussion, the abrupt revelation, etc.], which affects the legibility and persuasiveness of the article."
* * 3. Expressiveness and Language **
1. * * Language accuracy **
- An essay with accurate language: "The language is accurate and the words used are appropriate. It can accurately describe the content of the comic and express one's own views. For example,[list examples of accurate words used in the article]. There are no ambiguous meanings or inappropriate words."
- An essay with language accuracy problems: "There are some problems in language expression. Some words are not used accurately.[Point out the inaccurate words and explain the reasons]. This affects the accurate transmission of the content of the article to a certain extent."
2. * * Liveliness and appeal of language **
- Vivid and infectious essay: "The language is vivid and vivid. Through [listing the rhetorical devices used in the article or vivid descriptions], not only does it make the scenes and characters in the comic seem to come to life on paper, but it also allows the readers to deeply feel the enlightenment the author has gained from the comic. It has a strong appeal."
- An essay with plain language: "The language is relatively plain and lacks liveliness and appeal. It is mostly a straightforward expression. If you can use some rhetorical techniques or more emotional sentences, it will make the article more exciting."
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Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha
2:"Spiritual Realm Walker", Author: Xiao Langjun
3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2
4."King of Familiars", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound
Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building
National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village
7:"Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi
8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin
9:"Hidden Dead Corner", Author: Get Lost
Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan
Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen
This Game Is Too Real by Chen Xing LL
Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter?
Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive
National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain
Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig
17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong?
Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong
Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism
20:"Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow
The following is a detailed introduction of these novels:
1. Book of Troubled Times: Author: Ji Cha (Great God)
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Holding a sword in the Jianghu, drinking wine, slender waist and light palm.
The young man carried a long saber on his shoulder and hung wine on his waist. He strode forward, but the Jianghu in his heart was vaguely difficult to see.
Turning a page in the book of troubled times, it would rain for decades in the Jianghu.
Suddenly looking back, the world has been split into pieces.
2.<<Spirit Realm Walker>>: From ancient times to the present, it is rumored that there is a Spirit Realm in the world.
Regarding the Spirit Realm, there were many different opinions among the famous people of the past dynasties.
From the Qi Dynasty to the Tang Dynasty, the mountains were desolate, the spiritual realm was lonely, and few people visited.
It is difficult to find a ghost in the spiritual realm.
3."The Tang's Table": -[Excellent Series-]--Top 2500 likes next time!
This was the new masterpiece of the great historical god, Jie Yu 2. This time, the author had returned to the Great Tang, and this time, the author wanted to write about a different Great Tang. Jie and 2 said in the foreword of "I'm Not a Savage" that they wanted to let go of themselves and write a book that they liked the most, but that book ended up failing due to various reasons. Jie and 2 placed his dream in the Tang Empire that he was familiar with and wrote what he wanted to express in this book.
As the strongest historical writer in Qidian, just by looking at the first few chapters, one could tell that this book was of a high standard. Whether it was the standard of wording or the accuracy of history, it was much better than most historical writers. Moreover, the author had written about the customs and circumstances of the nomadic people at that time, allowing the readers to follow his description and return to the most authentic ancient nomadic people. The protagonist of this book did not have a cheat. At most, he could only rely on his modern knowledge and schemes to scheme against the enemy.
Interestingly enough, the book was called "The Great Tang's Table", so it naturally had a lot of descriptions of delicacies. The third chapter had a detailed description of delicacies, from how to process the ingredients to how to roast them, to the description of the ingredients after roasting. It could be said to be meticulous. It could even be said to the point where it made people drool.
Overall, there was nothing wrong with the book so far. The writing was excellent, and the rhythm was well controlled. The main character's character was a little over-the-top, but it was not a big problem. The plot development was also done with a certain degree of relaxation, and the details were handled well. Most importantly, it achieved a high degree of realism. It's a very good book. I recommend it.
King of Familiars: Er Quan's New Book
5: Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation: Half-Step Immortal Grass
A good book buried by the title. The story is logical, the characters are well portrayed, and the world view is not bad. Some of the characters 'IQ is not only online, but even beyond the standard. However, the plot during the ordinary period is not well written, and some are too deliberate. Overall, it seems that it has the potential to become a god for the time being.
6. National Forensics: 500 likes, 200 pills.
I'll write a new book in Bird Village.
The urban system's professional literature.
It was about a second-generation university graduate who became a forensic doctor. He obtained the system directly and obtained skills by completing system missions. The main story was that the forensic rookie used his cheat to reach the peak of the industry.
Reason for recommendation:
1. The capybaras 'book had the best writing style among the genre. Although the volume was large, it was still very enjoyable to read such words.
2. It was still the professional literature that capybaras were best at. From doctor to forensic doctor, all kinds of popular science were still very fluent. The dissection process was very detailed. It was recommended to read it during meals.
3. The protagonist was no longer inhumanely handsome, and the sense of immersion was very friendly.
4. The proportion of daily life would be very large. Those who liked daily life could be paid more attention to.
5. The golden finger was a skill obtained from a dead person. He still obtained the skill of frying eggs from a dead person and the fingerprint identification method. It was written in an interesting way.
Similar recommendations:
"Mental Crime"(highly recommended)"Corpse Whisperer""The Scavenger""Silent Testimony""Sci-fi Mysteries""Death Notice""Wild Detective""Ten Deadly Sins""The Forensic Examiner's Notes""Chief Forensic Examiner""" Deep Pupil "
I recommend a few books from Zhiniao Village: "Doctor Ling Ran,""The God of Rebirth,""Super Energy Country."
7:"Nvxia Wait": New book of the new Twelve Heavenly Kings in 2022, One Man, One Knife…One Bird (funny!) This cute pet of the new era was not simple. It directly revived the early stage…
The prince is fierce, the fairy is fierce
8:"Mantang Colorful": The author's new book, historical text, the opening is very exciting
9:"Hidden Dead Corner": 100 likes per page, top book list for a week, please support and like it.🈵
The title of the new book, Get Lost, seemed to have a hidden and grand inner meaning. However, it was indeed a completely different story. This one seemed a little like Inception and was worth reading.
10:"Final Divine Duty": 82 recommendations. I entered the pit for the mecha, but it's temporarily a world of high martial arts. It feels pretty good. The setting was rather novel. Hopefully, it was a world where Fang Xiang and the squid were combined.
11:"Beyond Time": Circle the new book! This time, it wasn't a joke. Xu Qingren didn't have many harsh words. He wrote down all the malicious words in a small notebook! He killed them one by one.
I like the style very much. I have the potential to pursue the immortals and devils. I want to crawl into my ear-sized notebook every day to read the saved manuscripts.
12:《This Game Is Too Real》:9.0。Chen Xing was indeed suitable for this kind of writing. Including the mastermind behind the scenes, he was the fourth catastrophe. The protagonist had traveled to the wasteland hundreds of years in the future. There was a shelter around him that allowed modern people to descend on clones with their consciousness. Therefore, the protagonist used the name of the game to trick players from the Blue Planet to help him build the apocalyptic wasteland.
There were many similar novels, and the future plot was controlled by the author. However, Chen Xing was one of the best.
"Red Heart Sky Patrol": It's very good. I can only say that the author of the physical book is very skilled. I strongly recommend it to readers who like classical Xianxia.
Ring of Fate: The Secret World Part 2
In the year 1368, at the end of July, Crimson would descend from the sky.
The fastest four-star Glory product.
After witnessing the end of the Battle of Jingnan, Jiang Xinghuo, who was the target of the Ten Clans Execution, finally heaved a sigh of relief.
As a veteran transmigrator, he could return to the modern world for eternal life after transmigrating for nine lifetimes.
Jiang Xinghuo, who felt that he was about to succeed, was so bored that he began to teach in prison, but it seemed that something was wrong...
Ma Sanbao: What is the Great Voyage Era in On Sea Power?
[Yao Guangxiao: On the Fate of a Nation is actually the legendary dragon-slaying technique!]
Zhu Gaochi: I haven't finished talking about the silver standard in the History of Chinese Money.
Jiang Xing Huo: "I'm going to be beheaded tomorrow. I'll tell you the rest of the lesson in your dreams."
At this moment, the walls of the Imperial Jail collapsed and a voice sounded.
"Mr. Jiang, I am Zhu Di. Please be the state preceptor!"
"Ascending on the Right Day": Immortal Grass Sprout
Otaku Pig's new book had a good response. The platinum author's character was guaranteed. Just put on the shelf, can be raised, can catch up with the change. His style was humorous and his worldview was solid.
Chapter 17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?": The Story of City Life
The male protagonist was hung up before his death, and he was a long-term spare tire. He was despised for blind dates in his thirties. He would rather die than fall in love when he was eighteen again.
Everything was "forward-looking" and he would never be a bootlicker. However, things were often the more he did not want to get something, the more he could get it. The male lead had started a new life...
Unexpectedly good-looking
The characters are pretty good
The female protagonist is scared and silly. She's quite cute. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is quite sweet.
"Deep Sea Ember":" licorice"
The New Book of the Far Eye.
Similar to the Lightless Sea's counter setting. The world was once basically destroyed, and everything was covered by the ocean. Only a few continents survived, and under the deep sea, there was an indescribable existence. The Old Ones had also perished, and the survivors sacrificed themselves to create an artificial sun to continue protecting the world. When the protagonist woke up, he found that he was left with only one room. When he walked out of the room, he possessed the captain of the ghost ship in another world. Of course, as the plot developed, it seemed that everything was not so simple. At the same time, the main character can randomly possess humans in the mainland city through consciousness projection. Currently, he is possessing one of the believers of an evil god whose goal is to restore the past.
This book had all the shortcomings of his previous works, namely, the off-line character, the uncomfortable mouth fetish, and the frequent "mechanical" action descriptions. In short, in my opinion, his character creation is completely inadequate. However, his strength was his grand worldview. Xyrin and the abnormal creatures could be considered soft science fiction, and starting from Daybreak Sword, he combined fantasy and science fiction. This book further introduced the elements of mystery, so this book was still worth looking forward to.
Setting:8
Plot:6
Writing Style:8
Others:7
"Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World" was a very special book. The author's imagination was unrestrained, the plot was novel and attractive, and the sense of immersion was very strong. The author's description made people feel as if they were in it, and they couldn't help but be moved. The plot in the book was full of ups and downs, making the readers unable to stop. The author's words were smooth and without losing their meaning, making it very enjoyable to read. There were no negative points in this book and it was very refreshing to read. It was a good book that was worth recommending.
"Who told him to cultivate!" <Book Status> 80,000 recommendation votes, 300,000 favorites, in progress
<Book Type> Classic Xianxia
[Tagging] Easy, big brain hole, funny, immortal cultivation, the world of great competition
[Description] Everyone said,"Lu Yang has spread the style of Dao Seeking Sect to the entire cultivation world by himself, but Lu Yang himself doesn't think so. The style of cultivation is crooked."
[What to Watch] Funny, we're serious/Who asked him to cultivate?
<Remarks> This is a hilarious Xianxia novel. The author has a big imagination and a clear idea. Continuing the style of the previous book,"Only the Great Vehicle Stage Has a Counterattack System", he walked the path of fun. Seeing the beginning, he could guess the ending, but he couldn't guess the process. The main thing was to surprise. It is recommended to eat with the comments of the book friends. The effect is excellent.
Dao Seeking (Child) Sect was incompatible with the other four immortal sects. Dao Seeking Sect had a different style from the cultivation world since its establishment. Because of his strange style (mental illness), even the demonic path could not plant spies. Anything that happened in Dao Seeking Sect was not surprising, and the reason was unexpected.
The main character, Lu Yang, surpassed his master and entered Dao Seeking Sect with the first place in the assessment. After that, he became a spy in the Immortal Cult and was praised by the Immortal Cult Master as a natural demon. Apart from his swordsmanship, which was probably the effect of the sword spirit, Lu Yang's other spells were different from others. For example, he could learn Spatial Bending and Spatial Bending and comprehend spatial spells. The Wolong was Lu Yang, and the Phoenix was Meng Jingzhou. If the two of them worked together, even the cultivation world would not be able to withstand it.
The more I look at it, the more I feel that this cultivation world seems to be very strange from the beginning! I actually think what Lu Yang said makes sense. It's probably just an illusion.
The plot was exciting, the setting was interesting, the writing style was excellent, and the style was light and funny. Sometimes, he would use a news-style narrative. His intelligence was online, and the characters 'words and deeds were in line with the character's design. The main character and the supporting characters had strange thoughts, and very few characters had normal thoughts and were honest people.
[Rating] 9
A similar book,"Only the Great Vehicle Stage Has a Counterattack System", strongly recommended.
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