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IN HIS WRITING

IN HIS WRITING

It is to be known, when a girl turns sixteen-: She is no more a girl! And, it is to be added, a man's greatest charm, is his rich earns and wit of standing out!! ***** ‘To, Miss Victoria Lancaster… My pen has sung, my writing has spoken… and I still remain a stranger! Or am I? My apologies for the wait, I stood by the riverside in Welsh lands, wondering why an imposter would impersonate my writings to you… Forgive me for calling him the word—I stand hurt, and hurt even more by this! From Prince Harry McVourse… with Love.' ***** Victoria Lancaster, fourth of the six Lancaster siblings, stands in the predicament of societal wants and her lone desire for love. Being introduced to society for the first time, and as the first daughter of her family to be introduced, she needs a successful first season. And a successful season for a lady means, securing a suitor and a husband! Concurrently, Harry McVourse, standing as Knight, seeks the same accomplishments as Victoria, but his situation is quite melodramatic! His mother, the third of King Charles' five wives—though each was married one after the other and divorced except for the last—seeks to have her two sons marry swiftly and bless her with a grandson. A grandson is not her will but a want from King Charles, demanded of his sons. This, indeed, is an all-queens' contest to see whose son shall deliver a grandson first. Knight, despite understanding the depth and urgency of the matter, knows that the partner must be his. An uncareful selection would lead to years of despair and pain! As of that matter, he depicts societal balls and celebrations as a confined showcase of hypocrisy and pretense. He needs see the eligible spinsters beyond societal confines, and that’s what leads him to stand as a night guard in the Lancasters' new London mansion. A coincidence? Therefore, with Victoria Lancaster being the definite spinster Knight becomes much engaged with, he gradually develops a desire for the girl. However, despite this desire, he is opposed by many admirers, especially his brother, Prince Edward McVourse, whose efforts cannot be overlooked, in addition to his half-brother, Prince William McVourse, a lad whose in future leaves Knight wrathful due to a certain impotent depiction. As a result, he delights in the idea of writing to Lady Lancaster every morning. An anonymous write! His intention being; to the least, stand out from the men in pursuit. However, without Knight’s knowledge, Victoria is slowly enjoying the curves and words in those writings. Each night, she dreads time to pass quickly, anticipating another writing to be brought to her. She becomes intrigued until she desires to know the man behind the writing. Additionally, her mother pressures her to stand firm on the choice of the man she is to choose—Lord Edward, Knight’s elder brother, who is said to possess two hundred thousand a year. The letters draw Victoria and Knight closer, but their budding connection faces significant challenges. Knight must navigate the rivalry with his brothers, particularly Edward and William, both competing for Victoria's hand, in addition to formally acquainting himself with the ladyship. Victoria, on the other hand, struggles to reconcile her growing feelings for the unknown writer with her mother's expectations and the societal norms of the time. What happens next? "In His Writing" is a novel set in the Victorian era, embracing themes of romance, mystery, and conflict, in addition to societal conflicts, identity, and desires. (DAILY UPDATES A WEEK.) I HOPE Y'ALL SHALL ENJOY. LIKE, COMMENT.
History
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How can feedback improve historical fiction writing?
It can also improve character development. If the feedback says that a character seems out of place in the historical setting, the writer can adjust the character's traits or actions. Moreover, feedback on the plot's pacing and how it relates to the historical events can lead to a better - structured story. If the story drags during important historical moments, the writer can speed it up based on the feedback.
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2024-11-05 21:18
What are the key elements in writing feedback for historical fiction?
The plot's plausibility in relation to the historical setting is important. In feedback, you might say if the events seem likely to have occurred during that era. Also, the use of language. If it's a historical fiction about ancient Rome, the language should not be too modern and should give a sense of the time. For instance, avoiding modern slang. And the overall atmosphere. Does it really feel like the historical period it's supposed to represent? This can be mentioned in the feedback.
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2024-11-05 19:35
Excellent feedback.
A good review usually needs to be developed from the following aspects: 1. The characteristics of the work itself: To read an excellent novel, we need to first understand its story structure, character creation, plot development, theme and other characteristics. After that, they could talk about what they had learned or what profound inspirations they had felt from the work. 2. Your own feelings: During the reading process, we may have various feelings such as being moved, shocked, thinking, feeling, and so on. At this time, we can share how we were moved by the work or talk about our reflection on the theme of the work. 3. Sharing with others: We can invite some like-minded friends to share our feelings and thoughts after reading, to exchange and inspire each other. An excellent review should combine the work itself with one's own feelings, and at the same time express one's thoughts and understanding of the work so that the readers can feel our opinions and thoughts.
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2024-09-24 04:01
Looking for feedback
I'm not a fan of online literature. I'm a fan of online literature. I can't provide any feedback. My purpose is to provide information and knowledge on various topics and to try my best to answer your questions. If you need a reflection on the novel, I suggest you read it and write one yourself.
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2024-09-24 01:13
Collect feedback!
Collect feedback! I'm glad to be able to help. Here's some information that might be useful: - After reading a book, a reader would express their thoughts and feelings after reading an article, book, or movie. - After reading, you can start from the following aspects: - describe and analyze the plot, characters, and theme of the work; - evaluate the language style, writing style, structure, logic, etc. of the work; - They shared their thoughts, feelings, and inspirations while reading or watching the movie. Of course, if you haven't read or seen the works you want to recommend, you can tell me. I can help recommend some works or provide some relevant information so that you can start reading or watching better.
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2025-03-07 18:10
Ask for feedback on 2 masterpieces
An example of a famous work is as follows: 1. A Hundred Years of Solitude One Hundred Years of Solitude was a Colombia novel with magical realism. After reading this novel, I was deeply attracted by its unique narrative style and profound content. In the novel, the seven generations of the Buenda family's family history was presented through a protagonist whose name runs through the whole story-Ursulla. Through the stories of herself and her family, she showed the changes in Colombia's history and the complexity of human nature. The whole novel was full of magical realism elements such as the yellow butterfly, the prophecy of José Alcadeo Buendía, and so on. These seemingly absurd elements deeply reflected the theme of the novel and the fate of mankind. In addition, the characters in the novel were also very rich and unforgettable. The members of the Buendía family had unique personalities and destinies. The feelings and conflicts between them were also very interesting. Especially the love story between the protagonist Ursula and her lover, José Alcadeo. One Hundred Years of Solitude was a very outstanding novel that profoundly revealed the complexity of human destiny and humanity through its unique narrative style and profound content. I like this novel very much and strongly recommend it to all readers who like magical realism novels. The Little Prince 'The Little Prince' was a French classic. After reading this novel, I was deeply influenced by the deep thoughts and touching emotions it brought. The little prince in the novel was a lonely traveler from another planet. He experienced many setbacks and difficulties, but in the end, he understood what he really wanted. The story of the little prince and the rose made me realize the importance of cherishing the person in front of me. In addition, the story in the novel was also very rich. Each story had different meanings and thoughts.
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2024-09-22 04:34
Report, feedback, comment
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2024-10-17 23:20
A novel with cultivation feedback
I recommend the author of Cultivation into Buddha, the lazy cat who peeked at the book. This was an oriental fantasy novel about monks practicing Buddhism. The main character was really cultivating Buddhism. Different from the common Buddhist cultivation business, it was full of compassion and positive energy. The protagonist was a little saintly but not repulsive. The Buddha in the book was to educate the world, to make the soul calm, to abandon evil and become good. Although it was a pity that it would break in the later stages, it was good in the early stages. " I Preached in the Six Dynasties " was not bad either. The author was born every day. Xianxia Classics, Xianxia type, combined with the background of the four masterpieces, there were wise people and heroes. The main character, Li Yu, was in a wonderful time and space. It was a harem novel that combined the elements of the four masterpieces. The plot was very interesting, such as teaching you to interact with the characters of the masterpieces. At present, it mainly merged the Water Margins and the Three Kingdoms. If it did not collapse, it was possible to become a god. The author of 'Reality Cultivation Diary' was destined to be extraordinary. Xianxia modern cultivation type, self-created cultivation novel, no scheming, the protagonist created his own cultivation method, good to look forward to. " Spy War: Confession of an Art Student ", a military spy by Niu toot. The protagonist had transmigrated into a small spy. He did not know anything but had the system space. He could watch him stir up the storm in Shanghai with his poems and songs. There was also " Dragon Clan: My System Ran On The First Day ", which was a Doujinshi derived from Xiao Xin's light novel. Xia Mi's Dragon Clan Doujinshi usually became better in the beginning. The main character Mu Yi drew his sword for the angel in his heart, Xia Mi, to the whole world. There was a unique plot setting. <a href="/?from=ask_words" style="color:red" target="_blank">Read more exciting novels for free</a>
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2026-04-18 11:28
Rate my short story. I need some feedback on my writing.
Sure! Well, first of all, it depends on what the short story is about. If it has a really engaging plot from the start, that's a great sign. For example, if it begins with a mystery or an interesting character in a tough situation. Also, the use of language is crucial. Vivid descriptions can make the story come alive. If your sentences are too simple and lack detail, it might not be as captivating.
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2024-11-09 15:01
Is Purplehaze Feedback a Graphic Novel?
No, it's not. Purplehaze Feedback isn't a graphic novel. It might be something else, but not in that genre.
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2024-10-08 01:57
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