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"This is a fantastic supernatural Western that oozes tension, grit, and mythic heft. Elias Thorne is a fascinating antihero; the curse is sinister, the villains are mundane and eldritch, and the unyielding pressure applies. This is more than another gunslinger story because of the balance of horror, fate, and moral choice; it’s about the will’s ability to fight against the inevitable." Character: Elias Thorne Charismatic, imperfect, and balancing on the line between survival and damnation. His arc is riveting, transforming from reckless gambler to self-sacrificing bearer of the burden. This will make readers root for him and fear for him. The Curse & Its Rules The idea of “borrowed luck” is pretty simple and yet horrifying. The gradual unraveling of Elias’s fortune provides natural suspense, and the Collector as its enforcer makes it all the more ominous. Malachai & The Collector Malachai himself is an intimate, humanistic danger, while the Collector is a more inexplicably dark and inescapable force that lends Elias’s fate a sense of claustrophobia. Their give-and-take maintains the tension. Moral Dilemma  The central question of sacrificing another or suffering the curse himself raises this above a mere survival story. That internal struggle is what will haunt readers. Cinematic Atmosphere: Dusty saloons, moonlit canyons, a town where curses are the currency—it drips with style. It’s a Western at its core but sprinkled with unsettling, supernatural dread. Areas for Enhancement: The Connection Currently, she mainly describes the curse and helps Elias on his journey. Make it personal; give her something to lose. Maybe she wants the amulet back, or she has her own desperate agenda. The Collector’s Voice It’s sinister, but how does it talk? If it had a sense of comedic absurdity, if it addressed him in riddles that pile onto Elias’s decisions, it would be much scarier. More Western-Infused Prose Your world seems increasingly Western, but you could drive the dialogue and narration deeper into the biting, poetic Western voice (Blood Meridian, The Sisters Brothers) and go a long way toward treating the reader to more immersion. [Book Wow Factor] That is a very powerful basis. With just a few tweaks to Selene and the Collector and a touch more Western style infusing the prose, this could be an instant classic. If this were on your shelf, you would snatch it up.

disclaimer: every book I post will have a minimum of 5 initial chapters. If the concept is cool to you, and you want to see more of it comment that, and I'll continue posting another 10 chapters. Most of all, I'd deeply appreciate feedback as an up and coming author. Thank you. Ever since Argonauts curse the world has been full of danger, but also wonder. Islands on the clouds Towers that pierce the stratosphere Dungeons filled with frightening beasts Demons, Angels, Gods, Titans, and Magic Beasts Enter- Itami a boy who dreams of being a hero like those of myth. Through his journey he goes through countless trials and tribulations that make him question what being a hero means. Would you like to watch it with me? If so, let's start in the beginning. FROM THE AUTHOR: This is my first novel and I'm posting it to get feedback. I did right the synopsis in a rush, so please don't judge the entire story off that. If you're interested about the full story of the lore the prologue will explain that otherwise skip it. The story takes 7 to 10 chapters to get to the more action portion, and the pace doesn't slow down. Whether it be harsh or nice I will accept criticisms with open arms, and if you have questions please ask. Most importantly, while I have my own vision for this story, I would love to hear yours. ** yes, I have the first 10 chapters done but it's subject to change. ** Let's not just go through Itami's journey, but mine as well.

An 18 year girl and professional gamer gets sucked into the VR game Fallen Tower and becomes... a drunk? Avidia is a gaming addict that gets the ability to become overpowerd but gets intoxicated off of blood in the process. Here's her story.

In a world where the clash of battles and wars never ceases, the life of an ordinary person is worth no more than a fleeting moment. In this stark reality, Kai, a young orphan raised in a remote shelter, fights every day for a piece of bread and a roof over his and his loved ones' heads. However, when he confronts the true brutality of this world, his destiny changes forever. Mysterious circumstances lead him to encounter the mystical Sphere — an artifact, a source of untapped powers. From this moment, Kai gains abilities he never imagined existed. Why did the Sphere come to him? Can Kai master and control the gifts it holds? Or perhaps, is all of this merely hallucinations, spurred by the horrors and traumas of imminent doom? Yet, having acquired immeasurable powers, Kai does not aspire to become a great hero or change the world around him. His thirst for knowledge propels him on a path of exploration. Majestic landscapes, ancient cities, and deeply concealed secrets of this world unfold before him. Dive into the world alongside Kai, uncover the hidden corners of this universe, and experience the full spectrum of emotions from his newfound abilities. Don't miss the chance to witness this incredible tale! P.s. No harem, no romance, no weak main character.

"All round cultivator?! That's impossible" Everyone present was shocked by my revelation to them. I couldn't blame them though. Who would have thought that I, Wang Wei, the failure of the Heaven Stream family would become a cultivator talk less of having access to every elemental plane. I promised to surprise everyone so I wasn't going to stop there. "Hybrid cultivation: Five pillars of dharma" I integrated my demon, artifact, spirit and beast at the same time and strode toward my cousin Liu Chen. With my morphed body I was sure I gave off enough aura to make my presence deadly. "He can even use all the classes?!" The patriarchs were speechless while watching my display of power but that didn't concern me one bit. I was engulfed by anger at that moment and was about to make Liu Chen regret thinking of that idea. "Liu Chen, you've crossed the line this time and there's no redemption for what you've done. I'm going to take your arms at least" I made my clone turn into a wall of spirit energy to cover Li Jing and Wang Miao and then I unleashed my ability, demon bomb. Liu Chen couldn't move because of overwhelming fear and only watched me about to end him. I was about to form a complete one and blast Liu Chen with it when three of the patriarchs including my dad suddenly appeared and stopped me.

2012 4:59 pm. The ground shakes as the end of the Mayan Calendar approaches. A magnitude 10 earthquake hits the heart of the USA and Violent Thunderstorms rained in Australia and 30 meter tsunamis sank Asia and Russia. The apocalypse came yet humans persist. Unearthed from the disaster endless catacombs of unknown origins . Some delve for treasure, science, thrill, or faith. The depths do not allow intruders. Wandering, inversely changed by the disaster, Emmerich Renec searches for his father who... Owes the lad a jar with a thousand dollars, in coins. "I would never be like my old man!" Drinking would be the last thing to think about on this dark fantasy dungeon crawling adventure! *Note First Few chapters is of a different POV for a duo later.

This is a story for writing prompt: 207: Male Lead - Video Games. Please show your support by voting with your power stones, leaving reviews, and leaving comments! Powerstone goals will grant bonus chapters! An expelled martial artist fell into depression and sorrow which led to him drinking day in and day out. His friends decided it was enough with the release of Boundless Fate. They are prepared to force him to play if that is what it takes! A tale of someone who has hit rock bottom climbs his way to the top.

I was born in a world that was always at war, and all I knew after I was taken from my home, was that very war. Every day was a battle and ever moment was fleeting, the men you met on the field weren't worth befriending, due to the pain you would suffer later by their loss. After dying in a world like that, I was met with a world with wonders that only those who were mad or on the death bed saw in heaven, but those around me treated it as if it were nothing, not knowing the luxuries of their lives. ================================== This is a MMORPG novel, hopefully that doesn't scare you off. Ill be honest I wanted to write a thing here that explains my novel, but I'm not one of those people who has everything planned to chapter 1000 like some of the better authors on this site. I write this mostly for fun and due to this opened up free time I now have, hopefully you will indulge me and at least read as far as you can before you get sick of my writing. And if you end up liking it, remember, the best thing you can do isn't give me power stones, but leave comments and add this to your collection.

She was the most revered only heir of the most influential & powerful hidden clan of SHAMAN, an oracle world. her divination spirit power was the strongest among the whole mainland. once she joined the other clans just to watch fun to see the phenomenon that happened in the enchanted forest. there at the core area of the forest, they found a mysterious tomb. There she found a mysterious Serpent shape Anklet that caught her attention. getting intrigued she raised her hand to touch it and as she touched the snake moved and bit her finger, she tried to take her hand away but couldn't. she felt her blood sucked away by the snake and soon she lost her consciousness.. ****** English is not my first language so please ignore my grammatical Mistakes and yes enjoy my first ever story..

Ren Coulter is used to working alone. As a special agent in the Paranormal Operations Unit of the border patrol, he is to infiltrate a reputed drug lord’s compound in Nogales, Arizona. His mission is to learn the source of a very dangerous and addictive new drug. He goes in drag, disguised as a glamorous young woman, to catch Mendoza’s roving eye. Even before he meets Mendoza, he encounters a Mendoza’s striking body guard.. Despite his lone wolf habits, Ren sees advantages in working together. Still, trust comes slowly and not without a hitch, but soon they must rely on one another to survive.<br><br>Darzul Onaygan has been sent from his home world of Arzula to blend in with the earthlings and help them fight off the evil alien invaders. Bisexual as most Arzulans are, many even able to switch gender at will, he finds Ren very attractive in both his guises. He sees Ren is interested but shocked to learn his new friend is not from earth. Darzul knows it takes more than hot sex to build a partnership. While outside threats may force them to work together, that alone cannot forge a bond. Will they live long enough to accomplish their mission and become real partners?