Positive and side descriptions were common techniques in novel writing. They could be used to portray characters, describe scenes, highlight the theme, and so on.
Positive descriptions referred to the direct description of the character's appearance, personality, behavior, and other characteristics so that the reader could directly feel the character's emotions and state. For example:
- She was wearing a black dress, her long hair draped over her shoulders, and her bright eyes looked at you as if they could see through your secrets.
- He was tall and muscular, and his muscles were firm and powerful. When he smiled, he revealed two cute dimples that made people want to hug him.
- On this hot summer day, they sat on the beach, enjoying the sea breeze and the moisture of the sun and sea.
The side profile described the surrounding environment of the character and the reactions of others to show the character so that the reader could understand the character more deeply. For example:
- He sat quietly in front of the window. Through the window, he could see the bustling streets outside. The crowd rushed past him, and he seemed unusually lonely.
- When she heard the doorbell, she immediately stood up and walked to the door. She looked at the door number and then looked at the person who came. She hesitated for a while.
- The group of them sat on a big bed surrounded by all kinds of furniture and items, making it extremely crowded. They chatted with each other.
Through these examples, it can be seen that both positive and side descriptions have their own functions and can be used together to achieve better descriptions.
An example of the beginning of the character description was as follows:
Her tall and sturdy figure stood out as she stood at the door. She was wearing a black dress and her long hair was draped over her shoulders. Her eyes were deep and cold, as if she could see through everything. Her tanned skin revealed a strong sense of determination.
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The classroom was so quiet!
Side profile:
- I could hear my own breathing and the sound of my pen sliding across the paper, but no one else seemed to notice that I was writing my answer.
- Suddenly, a soft sigh broke the silence. I looked up and saw the girl sitting in front of me reading seriously.
- The only sound in the classroom was the sound of books colliding and my heartbeat.
Positive description:
- The sunlight shone through the window into the classroom, making it exceptionally bright. I sighed and realized that the words on the blackboard had become clearer.
- The students sat quietly in their seats and listened attentively to the teacher's explanation. I was the only one who kept writing in my notebook to keep up with the teacher's thoughts.
Description of details was to describe the specific, vivid, and detailed details to show the characteristics and atmosphere of the characters, plot, environment, and other things so that the readers could better understand and feel the content of the work.
In writing a novel, detailed description is one of the most important skills. It can enhance the appeal and credibility of the work, allowing the readers to understand the characters and plot in the story more deeply.
The following are some requirements for detailed descriptions:
Description: Description of details should describe as many specific things and scenes as possible so that the reader can feel the realism and three-dimensional feeling.
2. Vivid: The description of the details should be vivid and interesting so that the reader can imagine the appearance of these details and feel their atmosphere and aura.
3. Outstanding characteristics: The description of details should highlight the characteristics of the characters, plot, or environment in the work so that the readers can better understand their characteristics and attributes.
4. Create an atmosphere: Description of details can create the atmosphere of the work by describing specific scenes, atmosphere, and details to enhance the appeal and appeal of the work.
For example, in Dream of the Red Chamber, the author Cao Xueqin described every detail of the Grand View Garden where Jia Baoyu lived, such as the blooming state, color and fragrance of begonia flowers, peach blossoms, pear blossoms, etc., as well as the furniture, utensils and decorations in the room, so that the readers could feel the exquisiteness and exquisiteness of the Grand View Garden, enhancing the realism and appeal of the work.
Description of details refers to the description of characters, things, or the details of the environment to enhance the vivid and realistic feeling of the novel. Common ways to describe details included:
1. Description of the character's expression, posture, eyes, etc. to show the character's inner state and feelings.
2. Description of action: Through describing the actions, gestures, postures, etc. of the character, it shows the state of the character's actions and feelings.
3. Language Description: Through describing the language, accent, and catchphrases of the characters, the characters 'personalities, psychology, and feelings are revealed.
4. Description of the environment: By describing the environment, scenery, atmosphere, etc. of the character, the mood of the character and the atmosphere of the environment can be displayed.
5. Description of details: By describing the details of people, things, or environments, such as clothes, hair, glasses, cups, stationery, etc., to show the character's personality, living environment, and feelings.
6. Sensory Description: By describing the feelings, hearing, and vision of the character, it shows the character's psychology and feelings.
7. Psychological Description: Through describing the inner feelings and thoughts of the character, it shows the character's personality, psychology, and feelings.
8. Description of clothing: By describing the clothes, shoes, belts, etc. of the character, the identity, status, and personality of the character can be shown.
These descriptions could be combined to form a more vivid and realistic novel image.
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Book of Troubled Times, Author: Ji Cha
2:"Spiritual Realm Walker", Author: Xiao Langjun
3: The Tang's Table, Author: Jie and 2
4."King of Familiars", Author: Light Spring Flowing Sound
Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation, Author: Mi Tian Building
National Forensic Medicine, Author: Zhiniao Village
7:"Wait, Heroine." Author: Guan Guan Gongzi
8: Mantang Colorful, Author: Weird Cousin
9:"Hidden Dead Corner", Author: Get Lost
Final Divine Duty, Author: Tuoba Goudan
Beyond Time, Author: Er Gen
"This Game Is Too Real." Author: Chen Xing LL
Red Heart Sky Patrol, Author: What's the Matter?
Ring of Destiny, Author: Squid Who Loves to Dive
National Master of Ming Dynasty, Author: West Lake Encountered Rain
Choose a Day to Ascend, Author: Otaku Pig
17:"Who's in Love After Rebirth?" Author: What's Wrong?
Deep Sea Ember, Author: Yuantong
Chapter 19: Cultivation in the Chaotic World of Demonic Martial Arts, Author: Wenplagiarism
20:"Who told him to cultivate!" Author: The Whitest Crow
The following is a detailed introduction of these novels:
1. Book of Chaotic Times: Ji Cha's Book of Chaotic Times
[Total ranking of Hundred Alliances: 164]
2023 Hundred Alliances Ranking: 1
[Hundred League Badge Release Time: February 3, 2023]
Title: Book of Troubled Times
Author: Ji Cha
[Author Level: Great God]
[Alliance Leader: 111]
[Silver Grand Alliance: 7]
[Golden Sect Leader: 0]
Fans/10,000: 60
<Category: Fantasy, Oriental Fantasy>
Total Words/Ten Thousand: 25
Date of publication: December 26, 2022
[Hundred League Time/Day: 37]
Last updated: February 1, 2023
First order: 30318
Average: Not counted
[Completed: No]
End date: ×
Writing time/day: ×
Date: February 5, 2023
2.<<Spirit Realm Walker>>: From ancient times to the present, it is rumored that there is a Spirit Realm in the world.
Regarding the Spirit Realm, there were many different opinions among the famous people of the past dynasties.
"From Qi to Tang, the mountains are desolate and the spirit realm is lonely. Few people visit."
"Spirit Realm is hard to come by, but Ghost Craftsmen are hard to come by."
3.<<The Tang's Table>> The people of the world and the affairs of the world are just the dishes on the table of the Tang people.
Although the original ingredients had the original flavor of food, Yun Chu still believed that the most delicious food still needed to be divided, cooked, and handled. The food that was finally served on the table was the food that most suited the stomach of the Tang people.
Steaming, braising, stir-frying, stewing... There were many cooking methods in the kitchen.
Whether it was Goguryeo, the Turks, Tubo, Tuyuhun, Xue Yantuo, Tiele…or even whales, tigers, sharks, and hungry wolves, the Great Tang was a furnace that could cook them all into peerless delicacies…
In addition to Li Zhi, Wu Wei, Zhangsun Wuji, Chu Suiliang, Li Ji, Cheng Yaojin, and other peerless seasonings, there would always be one thing that you would never forget, regardless of color, fragrance, or taste.
Yun Chu hoped that she would definitely have a seat at such a luxurious banquet!
Now, the delicious food had been cooked. Yun Chu laid out the napkin, picked up the deer knife, and closed her eyes. She was ready to enjoy an unprecedented feast to satisfy her hungry stomach.
4."King of the Familiar": I really like this type of book. It gives people a feeling that their eyes are shining. There are no traces of routines. The style of writing is relaxed and not oppressive. I feel pretty good at the moment.
Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation: Fairy, Please Listen to My Explanation is a surprising novel. The story was set in time travel. The main character's soul traveled into a game world and became the third son of the Xu family, the villain who would be killed at the beginning of the game. However, as the protagonist explored, he discovered that the good in the game was actually the evil side. How the protagonist would reverse the future and complete the reform of the sect and the imperial court was something that everyone looked forward to. Although there were few emotional scenes, each female lead was clearly portrayed. In addition, the author's intelligence was on the line. The male lead did not lick the female lead every time he saw her. Overall, this novel was worth reading.
6.<National Forensic Medicine>: It's about forensic medicine. After reading it, I feel that it's very good.
7."Wait, Heroine": I'm used to reading many tricks in the book and tired of the system upgrade. Then I'll experience a different martial arts world! The world's wind and clouds come from my generation. Once I enter the martial arts world, time will rush! The emperor's plan to dominate the world is to talk and laugh, but I can't get drunk in life. This kind of pleasure in the martial world, this kind of heroic spirit, wouldn't it be great!
Book Title: Heroine Wait
Author: Guan Guan
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Tagged: Wuxia Invincible Wen Daily Female Lead
[Plot summary: The main story is about the protagonist who transmigrated to a martial arts world and became an orphan. He was raised by his adoptive father, but the adoptive father passed away when the protagonist grew up.] After that, the protagonist followed his will and came to the Great Wei Imperial City to begin his Jianghu story!
In this world, there were the Northern and Southern Dynasties, there were the quick and happy grudges, there were the Heavenly Martial Arts, and there were poems and songs. The main character, on the other hand, revealed his true identity step by step through various events in this world. He met his beloved woman and family, and created his own martial arts legend.
The main story and side story were clear, the writing was smooth, and the fighting scenes were exciting. There were almost no poison points, and the author had racked his brains to match the couplets. It was a martial arts novel that was very worth watching.
[Introduction: Invincible style protagonist, grand story background, and very good at daily life and emotional processing.] Whether it was the male and female leads or the birds, they were all very well portrayed. Whether it was his style of doing things or his language and personality, he was very likable. I think the description of the pet bird is very cute, and it played a big role in advancing the plot and breaking the situation.
There was also a wonderful couplet section in the article. Unlike the copy, most of it was thought up by the author himself! In this aspect, he was very impressed with Guan Guan. By the way, Guan Guan's driving skills were first-class and had been recognized by many book friends.
The book had a grand world view, and the nine dragon pictures were scattered all over the world. It was also very fulfilling to watch the protagonist take them step by step. Many of the plots in the book were very humorous and made people smile from time to time. It was very unique! The civil can open his mouth to scold the ministers, and the martial can punch the world! It made one's blood boil!
8."Mantang Huacai": A work that traveled through the Tianbao period of Xuanzong. It was a rare masterpiece among historical novels in recent years. It cut into the civil case and portrayed the battle between the Crown Prince and Li Linfu. The advantage was that the plot was closely linked and the suspense was high. It was extremely catching and also had an excellent description of the shadow behind the Great Tang. The main flaw was that the characters were relatively flat. The main character was "very intelligent and close to a demon." Moreover, the harem was too obvious. As long as the female characters met the male lead, all their positions and wisdom were almost useless. They revolved around the male lead. Although this kind of writing was clever, it was a little flat. It was fine for ordinary novels, but it was a flaw for a book.
Slightly flat but still vivid characters: 6
A detailed description of the ecology of the prosperous Tang Dynasty: 8
Interlocking and Suspenseful Plot Design
9."Hidden Dead Corner":"Hidden Dead Corner" is an amazing novel. The author, Get Away, brings a brand new reading experience to the readers with his unique writing style and creativity. The book's rating was 8.8, which showed that it was highly recognized by readers. The new book gave people a sense of freshness. The first and second half of the book were excellent, and people could read it without worry.
The copy of this book was also quite outstanding, leaving a deep impression on everyone. Especially the description of divine works and immortality, it made people feel the mysteries of the universe and the wonders of life. The description of Psionic Ascension was even more shocking. Psionic Energy existed in everything, showing the origin of the universe.
In addition, the readers were pleasantly surprised to find that the author's new book,"The Hidden Dead Corner," had already begun. This made many readers excited. The beginning of the book made people unable to extricate themselves, making people want to follow the story immediately. Even though there were only four chapters, the readers were looking forward to seeing more chapters over the weekend. Overall, this book was a pleasant reading experience and was worth reading.
10."The Final Clergy":"The Final Clergy" is an exciting science fiction novel. I give it a recommendation score of 82. The setting of this book was very novel, making people feel as if they were in a fantasy world full of mechas and divine power. In the story, the protagonist Lu Yuan had an attribute panel that allowed him to change his class indefinitely. In the era of the collision of magic and technology, he continued to grow and gradually grasped power. The battle scenes in the book were also very exciting, making people feel as if they could personally feel the collision of that kind of power. Overall, this book was a very exciting science fiction novel. Whether it was from the setting or the storyline, it was very worth reading.
11:"Beyond Time": Circle the new book! This time, it wasn't a joke. Xu Qingren didn't have many harsh words. He wrote down all the malicious words in a small notebook! He killed them one by one.
I like the style very much. I have the potential to pursue the immortals and devils. I want to crawl into my ear-sized notebook every day to read the saved manuscripts.
"This Game Is Too Realistic":(° ° ° °
The overall tone of the wasteland game is relaxed, but it doesn't lose its hardcore. It even feels a little like a farm. The beginning of a sanctuary is to rely on the name of the closed beta game to attract people through Group chats. Then, through the addition of people, the game is set up. The map is slowly expanding the world view, gradually improving, and slowly advancing. The beginning of the wasteland is relatively rare now. The interaction between the game and reality at first attracted players, and it was also very funny. There was obvious progress on the basis of the previous book. The setting is more daring and fascinating. I also like the author's previous book very much. The direction of this book is completely different from the previous book. Chen Xing has also been making breakthroughs, improving, inheriting, and creating new ideas. I recommend it very much!
13:"Red Heart Sky Patrol": -[Excellent Series-]--Top 3500 likes next time!
It was a rather exciting Xianxia novel, written by one of the twelve heavenly kings in the year 2022,"Why Do I Feel So Formidable?" Why did this book stand out among so many Xianxia writings? I think there are three reasons.
First, the author's writing skills were outstanding. Not to mention the various exciting plots at the end, many readers would be attracted from the first chapter. The first chapter was about the duel between two masters. The writing was excellent, but the emotional fluctuations were even better. Everyone thought that Zuo Guanglie would burn himself and die with his pursuers, but in the end, he was beheaded with a light sword. This kind of treatment showed the gap between cultivators and was fascinating.
Secondly, the character was attractive. The main character was a tenacious cultivator. No matter what the situation was, he would have the spirit to fight. Moreover, he was not a saint. For example, when he was betrayed by his good brother, he would kill him regardless of what others said. As for the other characters, even if they were villains, they were not brainless. The descriptions of the small characters were also very appropriate and vivid.
Third, excellent control of rhythm. For example, in the opening story, after the protagonist killed his old friend who had betrayed him in a duel, the author did not mention the matter at all. Instead, he described the outcome of the traitor and the sadness of his brother's betrayal through the actions of the protagonist's other brothers. This way, the readers were immersed in the aftertaste of the incident. In the next chapter, there was a sudden change in the situation and a battle scene. It could be said that the control of the rhythm was extremely outstanding.
Overall, this book was worth reading and was highly recommended.
"Ring of Fate":"Ring of Fate" was an old white book with a strong style of writing and story. The author skillfully combined the web novel routine with the ancient style writing style, making people unable to stop. The plot of this book was so compact that it made people want to continue reading. The author's idea was very ingenious, making people wonder what would happen next. The world view in the book was also very unique, filling people with curiosity and anticipation. In the process of reading, the readers could not only feel the tension and excitement of the story, but they could also be inspired to think about life, emotions, psychology, society, history, and other issues. Overall, this book was a good book that made people immersed in it. I recommend it to readers who like ancient style writing and mysterious stories.
After witnessing the end of the Battle of Jingnan, Jiang Xinghuo, who was the target of the Ten Clans Execution, finally heaved a sigh of relief.
As a veteran transmigrator, he could return to the modern world for eternal life after transmigrating for nine lifetimes.
Jiang Xinghuo, who felt that he was about to succeed, was so bored that he began to teach in prison, but it seemed that something was wrong...
Ma Sanbao: What is the Great Voyage Era in On Sea Power?
[Yao Guangxiao: On the Fate of a Nation is actually the legendary dragon-slaying technique!]
Zhu Gaochi: I haven't finished talking about the silver standard in the History of Chinese Money.
Jiang Xing Huo: "I'm going to be beheaded tomorrow. I'll tell you the rest of the lesson in your dreams."
At this moment, the walls of the Imperial Jail collapsed and a voice sounded.
"Mr. Jiang, I am Zhu Di. Please be the state preceptor!"
"Ascending on an Ascending Day":"Ascending on an Ascending Day" was a novel about immortal cultivation. The author attracted the attention of the readers with his unique creativity and wonderful plot. In the story, the protagonist was an ordinary snake-hunter. He was gifted, but he was forced to enter the world of cultivation. Through describing the adventures and growth of the protagonist, the author presented a broad worldview and rich storyline. From heaven to earth, to heaven and hell, the protagonist's adventures were amazing. At the same time, the book also incorporated some social and human thoughts, making people reflect on their own lives and emotions. Overall, the plot of this book was compact and fascinating. It was a cultivation novel worthy of recommendation.
17:"Who's Going to Fall in Love After Rebirth": Reborn urban literature, the routine is the same, but the writing is good, humorous, and funny. The IQ is online, very interesting! It was worth recommending!
"Deep Sea Ember" is an unforgettable novel. The author brought the readers into a wonderful world full of horror and humor with his unique punk style. The protagonist of the story, Captain Duncan, and his crew, as well as the various strange things they encountered, made people laugh. Under the pen of the big eye, the terrifying scene became funny, and the existence of Captain Duncan also gave the reader a sense of security. Whether it was scary or funny, the author grasped it just right, making people unable to stop. This book is highly recommended!
19."Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World":"Cultivation in the Chaos of the Demonic Martial World" is an unforgettable novel. With his unique creativity and superb writing skills, the author, plagiarist, successfully created a character who attacked the foreign world. The main character of the story, Fang Xi, transmigrated to a cultivation world full of monsters and martial artists and began his wonderful adventure. The author cleverly combined the rules of the cultivation world with the heavy blows of the foreign world, bringing a refreshing reading experience to the readers. The plot was compact, the characters were vivid, and it was fascinating. The plagiarist's writing style was unique, full of imagination and creativity. Whether it was from the content of the book, or from the perspective of life, emotions, psychology, society, and history, this book gave people inspiration and thought. I strongly recommend 'Cultivating in the Demonic Martial World' and give it a four-star recommendation index.
"Who told him to cultivate!" Type: Easy, Brain Hole
Protagonist: Lu Yang connecting to
Reward index: *****(Admissioned!)
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The last book, The Great Vehicle Stage, was really good.
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