One great fanfiction could be where Loid and Yor's first kiss is a result of a near - miss mission. They think they might lose each other and in a moment of intense emotion, they share a kiss. It's a sweet and unexpected moment that deepens their connection.
A good Loid x Yor kiss fanfiction should have well - developed characters. The build - up to the kiss is crucial. It could start with small, subtle moments of attraction between them, like lingering glances or accidental touches. This creates anticipation for the readers.
By showing their shared experiences. For example, when they are both trying to protect Anya from something or someone. This common goal can bring them closer as they rely on each other's skills. They start to trust each other more and more with each passing situation.