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Volume 2 of my short story collection with another 50 stories. Warning: dark, twisted, disturbing, violent, gory and perverse material contained herein.

John M. Python is a frail 16-year-old geek, who is not afraid to break from his shell of personality and fight back. That's the reason why he always gets beat up by bullies and his arrogant, strong twin brother, Alex, always steps in to help him out. However, at one point in their school life, John started bragging about being stronger than his brother which made Alex furious. This turning point in Alex's behavior not only makes John's new way of thinking evolve and try to be stronger than him, but also stand up and rebel against his oppressors. John says he doesn't need his brother's help which also adds up to their dispute. But when Alex accidentally helps his brother after seeing him get beaten up in a school field trip, the delinquents start planning something big and really dangerous to him.

What if success whispered in your ear, solved your problems... and rewrote reality behind your back? Rachel never asked to be chosen. One morning she woke up with gaps in her memory, a strange interface whispering through her thoughts, and classmates acting like yesterday never happened. But when the system began guiding her—subtly at first—life got easier. Her answers were faster. Her instincts sharper. People listened. And others began to fall into line. Grades soared. Doors opened. Friends changed. But so did reality. Her roommate vanishes. Faculty begin to disappear—or forget. A debate turns into a performance. And through it all, Rachel alone remembers the pieces that shouldn’t fit. The system promises progress. Perfection. Control. But beneath it's code is something hungry. Something watching . And Rachel may be the last one who can see it coming. Now Rachel must decide: stay compliant and powerful, or rebel and be erased. Power is seductive. But compliance has a price—and the invoice always arrives.

John M. Python is a frail 16-year-old geek, who is not afraid to break from his shell of personality and fight back. That's the reason why he always gets beat up by bullies and his arrogant, strong twin brother, Alex, always steps in to help him out. However, at one point in their school life, John started bragging about being stronger than his brother which made Alex furious. This turning point in Alex's behavior not only makes John's new way of thinking evolve and try to be stronger than him, but also stand up and rebel against his oppressors. John says he doesn't need his brother's help which also adds up to their dispute. But when Alex accidentally helps his brother after seeing him get beaten up in a school field trip, the delinquents start planning something big and really dangerous to him.

Cruiszier Louie Gonzales De Castro , known as the Cruisin' Casanova and one of the most sought out bachelor in his generation, woke-up one day realizing that he played with the wrong hallowed bitch. The woman he thought as merely one of his toys already made a huge hole in his great ship. Every woman who used to chased him are now ensuring their distance. Almost everyone . In his sweet escape, he met the most optimistic person in Italy. She was his first. His first Hope , his first Love and His first Heartbreak. Sophie was the most optimistic person he'd ever met. Her vibrant smile brings life to almost everything around her. But there was something hidden in those bright smiles ,something very dark . --- Alas, He chose to stare straight at the darkness. But will she finally feel him? Witness how Cupid's Schemes help them realize the silent voices within their hearts . Imagine Cupid's arrow for the first time

a pair of sisters who had supernatural powers unknown to the world. How they deal with to destroy their enemies and protect their love intrests.

The odds of meeting your soulmate in a candy store is slim but never zero. He’s your cliche ‘bad boy’ that you always read about , and like all the cliches he doesn’t know how he feels- which leads to complications , and she’s your ray of sunshine. Always looking at the positives , even though she has just as much troubles as he does. Trigger warnings , mild language and stereotypes. Good luck and do enjoy

Never give up what ever it take keep it up

Akira ido is reincarnated as deku with feedbacks powers this is my first fanfiction so give feedback please

Always Think Positive Through The Name Of Jesus