Well, one notable feature could be its unique art style. Visual novels often rely on their art to draw in the readers, and this one might have a distinct look that sets it apart. Maybe it has really detailed character designs.
Often in collaborative works, there could be a lead writer who is responsible for the overall story arc. Then there might be artists who design the characters and backgrounds. Maybe there are also some people in charge of the music and sound effects. But without more information, it's hard to say exactly who the main creators of 'collaboration works of waffles visual novel' are.
Well, without reading the specific short story, it's hard to give a very detailed analysis. However, Joan Bauer is known for her vivid characterizations. So in 'Pancakes', the characters might be developed in interesting ways. For example, a character could learn a valuable life lesson while making pancakes, like the importance of patience or the joy of simple things. The story could also use the setting of a kitchen or a diner where pancakes are made to create a warm and inviting atmosphere.
Xi Men Qing's novel of selling pancakes can be referred to as the following example:
In the Water Margins, Ximen Qing was the owner of a steamed bun shop in Yanggu County. He was cunning and lascivious, and was sentenced to death for killing someone by mistake. After his death, he turned into a ghost and continued to harm the human world. In the plot of the novel, Ximen Qing often used his insidious means to seek personal gain, and even the wife of the cake seller was deceived and controlled by him.
In 'Dream of the Red Chamber', Jia Zhen, the second son of Jia Baoyu's cousin, Lin Daiyu's father, Jia Jia, was married to Ximen Qing. Jia Zhen's wife, Xue Baochai, became pregnant because she had an affair with Jia Zhen's mother, Madam Wang's niece, Jin Pingmei. The son that she gave birth to, Jia Lian, was the reincarnation of Ximen Qing in the novel.
I'm not sure which specific 'waistcoat of pancakes' children's story you are referring to. There could be many original or local stories with such a unique name.
Yes, I recommend the novel " Humble Immortal " to you. It tells the story of a child named Adai. After his mother sold her dowry for him to cultivate, he became the world's number one immortal. Although it did not directly describe Ximen Qing selling pancakes, it also described the story of a person from a poor family who turned around and became a noble. It was also very worth watching. I hope you like my recommendation.😗
Maybe it's about Captain Pancakes going on a quest to find the ultimate pancake recipe. Along the way, he meets different characters, some friendly and some not so much, and has to overcome various obstacles to achieve his goal.
Since I haven't read the actual story, I'm not sure who the main characters are exactly. But they could be a family member who is good at making pancakes, like a mother or grandmother.