Samsara Love Story Review Board"The Reincarnation of the Immortal Path" was a fantasy immortal cultivation novel created by the author, Blue Star Calamity. It told the story of a world full of ghosts and demons, strong people like clouds, and sects like stars. Abhijina, secret arts, all techniques returned to their roots, restrictions, and magic treasures. Treasures of heaven and earth, elixirs and pills, seeking immortality and seeking Dao were all for longevity. Myriad races coexisted, immortals and martial artists fought, worlds stood in great numbers, and only ascension could be achieved…A genius biological scientist had an accident during an animal soul extraction experiment. When he woke up, he found himself in a cultivation world…Du Fan: "Born in reincarnation, only cultivation is possible." The overall rating of this book was: Three-star, reincarnation is born and reincarnation is destroyed, and no one can break the tribulation of reincarnation.
This book had already uploaded more than a million words, and it was finally on the shelves today! This was my first time writing a book. When I wrote more than 300,000 words, I suddenly realized that my writing style was the rumored slow type. Whether it's the story plot, the world structure, or even the cultivation technique setting, I'm used to gradually uncovering the veil and showing it bit by bit. It gives people a sense of growth. After writing more than a million words, the plot of the book had already unfolded, and the world structure had gradually become clear. The following story would become more and more exciting, so it was the most suitable time to publish it. Finally, there is still the same sentence. If there is an outline, it will definitely be completed. I hope that fellow Daoists can support it, and I hope that everyone can give valuable suggestions to make this book better and better. If your financial strength allows it, please support the purchase. Thank you, fellow daoists. [fn It was a very good novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I think this book will definitely be able to become a god. I've read dozens of chapters, but I didn't read the rest, but I don't think the first few chapters are very attractive. It seems that the first few dozen chapters were written in a personal review. I hope the author doesn't mind. It's just my personal opinion. I hope your fans can understand that what's really good for the author is to be a mirror for the author or to cover up the author's shortcomings as makeup. I was attracted by the introduction, but after reading it, I felt that other than the writing style, the logic was not very good. Let's first talk about how unreasonable it was for the protagonist to follow Chu Qian in chapter 15. Chu Qian is an immortal cultivator. If your novel is really similar to mortals, then immortal cultivators should have divine sense, right? Is it so easy for Chu Qian to be followed by the main character who is still a mortal? Wu Hao lived in a courtyard, right? However, how could a person with a Foundation Establishment father not have an array to protect him? How could the main character enter so easily? Did Wu Hao not have divine sense? In the dozens of chapters of the novel, divine sense was rarely mentioned, but it was not that there was no such thing. However, there was no detailed discussion of the relationship between divine sense and level. When Wu Hao's Foundation Establishment father discussed with Wu Hao, as a Foundation Establishment cultivator, how could he not have divine sense to find the main character who was not far away? It was possible for the protagonist to eavesdrop from a distance, but how far away could he hear? Also, when the main character was discovered, Wu Hao and his son chased after him but did not find any traces of anyone escaping? For example, the mana fluctuations left behind by immortal cultivators when they used their mana to escape. This was something that was easily mentioned in the mortal immortal cultivation biography. As a foundation establishment cultivator, he would not be able to sense the direction. Would the speed of a foundation establishment cultivator be inferior to a low-level qi cultivator? Why would a Foundation Establishment cultivator rather believe the protagonist's words than try to chase after him? After all, if the matter was exposed, it would affect his life? Also, I personally think that it's good for most people to kill the main character in this situation. At this time, there will definitely be many people who say that the main character is dead, so what's the point of writing? I can only say that the plot itself is not suitable. Because this concerned the lives of Wu Hao and his son, leaving the main character was a big variable. After killing the main character, they could find a confidant to explain to the Yao family that the main character was killed by the forbidden array formation, or find a scapegoat to say that the main character was killed by a Qi Cultivation stage side character when he saw someone else's privacy. Then, the confidant of Wu Hao and his son would kill the Qi Cultivation stage side character to avenge the main character, making the Yao family members who had no strength have nothing to say. These were all methods. Other than that, it was worth affirming that the protagonist chose to commit suicide at the critical moment. This was the only way to survive. The author's use of this method was worthy of affirmation, but it was not suitable for the immortal cultivators created in the novel because immortal cultivators had divine consciousness. It would be suitable if it were a martial arts novel. There were also other illogical points. The protagonist entered the sect to plant spiritual herbs. I felt that the people in the sect were very friendly. This was the feeling that the author gave me. This was because many people in the sect could knock on the main character's door. The main character's spirit herbs were planted in the spirit herb garden. Could it be that the spirit herb garden did not have a formation? Didn't the main character live in the house next to the spirit herb garden? According to the previous mortal novels, the spirit herb garden was so important that it should have a formation. Moreover, those at the Qi Refinement stage would casually enter and knock on the door of a cultivator. If it was in many cultivation novels, that would be a big taboo. There were still many illogical points that I won't explain one by one. After all, it's not easy for an author to write a novel. This novel looks like a classic in terms of language and sentences. It makes me look at it like I'm looking at a mortal. Of course, it's also because the main character is a transmigrator. Sometimes, I feel that the use of modern words ruins the entire story, but overall, it's still passable. I don't know what happens after that, but the beginning doesn't attract anyone. I just want to ask the author, how are you going to force the readers to read to the end? This book was probably between hay and grain. At least, there was no melodramatic face-slapping plot. However, it was not similar to the style of ordinary cultivators. The main character was too impetuous and did not know his place. He had just transmigrated and wanted to transform the herbal field. Not to mention that this world was different from Earth, your biological common sense could not be applied to the cultivation of spiritual herbs. The growth of spiritual herbs required spiritual qi, and the main character knew nothing about the principle of spiritual qi. Why did he have to create a companion to promote its absorption? Even if the instinct of an expert scholar made you want to experiment, you should at least get a small piece of land to experiment. It was not surprising that Steward Liu was angry. He was kind enough not to kill you. Even if you were lucky and succeeded, so what? The protagonist who had just arrived did not understand his master's personality and temper. Who knew if it was good or bad? The protagonist was suddenly so arrogant. Was he not afraid of being searched by others? After all, he was just a small farmer. If he died, so be it. Otherwise, he would have died sooner or later... This book was pretty good, but the main character had a problem with his personality. He didn't know how to put himself in other people's shoes and had an inexplicable sense of superiority.
"Book of Rebirth" was an ancient romance novel written by the author who read books in his spare time. It told the story of Su Feimo, who was living a good life, but got a book that recorded the secrets of her previous life. There was only one sentence in the beginning of the book, which foretold the impending death. From the moment he opened the secret manual, was it a bridge that connected his previous life and this life? Or had he fallen into Mi Tian's trap? The nightmare of the past gradually unfolded. Would everything go according to the prophecy? Or will it be different? A group calling itself Qidian…keeps sending me messages to recruit new members. Today, the members of the group voted for Wen with a bunch of 1 points, and Wen's evaluation score suddenly became 5 points. Correct, I checked the evaluation rankings yesterday. It's 3 points. She even received 3200 long comments for swearing. I don't want to evaluate how well the article is written. Those who read the article will have their own opinions. I will not comment on this harassment, I just want to finish this story well,
"The Strong Man Who Walked Out of the Movie World" was a novel by the author, Little Top. It told the story of a mysterious black bead that brought Chen Lang into a different world. He had struck the bell in Shaolin Temple, caught thieves in the Four Famous Hunters, been a hero in the Fu Lian, and saved the earth with Superman! Traveling through the endless world of movies, leaving behind countless footprints and legends, writing one legend after another! Ps1: Reader group: 398110585Ps2: Pick up your integrity and start anew Ps3: Please don't slap your face. The user group's evaluation of the book is:
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The key phrase of the story was "The Law of Transmigration." The overall evaluation of this book was "It's not easy to transmigrate to another world. You have to start from scratch. You're not a genius. You only have a mature mind and will." This was a wonderful legend where the male and female leads nurtured each other. The main point was that the world was never black and white. The gray between black and white was where survival was.
"The Legend of the Wang Family's Cultivation" was a Xianxia-classical Xianxia novel written by the author, Little Pig Hoof, who worked hard. It told the story that the development of a family did not depend on the hard work of one person, but on the hard work of all the men, women, and children in the family to make progress together. Let's watch a miserable transmigrator lead the family he personally created to soar in the vast cultivation world.
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