The story told by the road to heaven

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"We agreed to make a bad game, what the hell is the Titan's Fall?" was a game system novel created by the author Ibufen Warrior. It told the story,[I, Shen Miao Miao, was forced to take over a game company at the beginning.]
Fortunately, the Rebate System was awakened in time. As long as the company suffered losses, the system would compensate them with ten times the amount!
Therefore, my goal is to bring down the company!
Wealth and freedom!
[I, Gu Sheng, transmigrated to become a game designer at the beginning.]
Fortunately, the Game Treasury System had awakened. As long as he continued to produce explosive games, he would be able to ascend to the throne of the King of Games!
Therefore, my goal is to become bigger and stronger!
Create another glory!
When the CEO met the sixth designer, the company's style gradually became abstract.
What the hell is this Titanfall?"
"What happened to the horror game market?
What's with Outlast?"
"Didn't you say that second-generation shooting is easy to lose?
You're remaking Call of Duty?"
Looking at the financial report of the full line of profits, Shen Miao Miao's head was buzzing.
She could not lose a single cent, so she could only make up her mind!
"From now on!
Torment the players!"
She did not believe that she could not lose this money!
Upon hearing this, Gu Sheng unfolded the proposal in his hands."Boss, what do you think? Black, Blood, Benevolence, Wolf…Which one should we do first?"
The character information included: Gu Sheng is the male lead, and the information about him included: Make him bigger and stronger!
Create another glory!
Her age was 23.0 years old, her birthday was 05/22, her constellation was Gemini, her height was 180cm, Shen Miao Miao was the female lead and the information about her was [Overturn the company!]
Wealth and freedom!
She was 23.0 years old, her birthday was 12/13, her constellation was Sagittarius, and her height was 164cm. 50 was a supporting character. The information about her was: A banknote in a frame, her birthday was 01/01, and her constellation was Capricorn. The overall rating of this book was: [75 points, good grass, game production]
It felt like a combination of the rich man and the light novel that made the game. The male and female protagonists basically stitched the elements of the two books together. It could be considered to have combined the characteristics of the two books. The setting of the two main characters was quite interesting. After all, they could also push some emotional scenes.|
[Author: Ibuprofen Warrior (Level 1)]
Game System
Receiving ratio: 3.2
First order:8643 (available on May 1st, 2023)
[I, Shen Miao Miao, was forced to take over a game company at the beginning.]
Fortunately, the Rebate System was awakened in time. As long as the company suffered losses, the system would compensate them with ten times the amount!
Therefore, my goal is to bring down the company!
Wealth and freedom!
[I, Gu Sheng, transmigrated to become a game designer at the beginning.]
Fortunately, the Game Treasury System had awakened. As long as he continued to produce explosive games, he would be able to ascend to the throne of the King of Games!
Therefore, my goal is to become bigger and stronger!
Create another glory!
……
When the CEO met the sixth designer, the company's style gradually became abstract.
"Didn't you say that no one is playing the mecha game?
What the hell is this Titanfall?"
"What happened to the horror game market?
What's with Outlast?"
"Didn't you say that second-generation shooting is easy to lose?
you F| In Parallel World, the two main characters who were supported by the system killed everyone in the game world (and also the cute female lead who was unconsciously wearing a money-losing system).
The smile wouldn't disappear, it would only be transferred to the reader's face.
What did she mean by 'a dragon and a phoenix made in heaven'? The female lead who was earning money with tears in her eyes really had Boss Pei's style ~| It's my favorite game designer's novel. It has Tengda's shadow. The author's writing style is also good. The plot is interesting. It's worth a full book.| I haven't read games for a long time. This is a book about making games. Not bad.| The games they make are all very interesting. I want to play them now.| I can understand the author deleting the review. The content has been modified, and the original review is outdated. What does it mean to be permanently banned?
I've always ordered everything.
Let's write President Lotus's 10 million investment as 2% of the company's shares (equivalent to a company's valuation of 500 million. Although it's a little low for the company's cash flow and growth, considering that the company now relies on a few big shots, the risk is still quite high). This way, in the long run, it will definitely make a lot of money. The readers will be in a good mood, and in the short term, it will indeed cause the small treasury to shrink. President Lotus is also anxious to lose money and return it.
Or, write it as a core member's equity incentive. President Ou would buy 4% of the shares with 4 million yuan, and privately lend 6 million yuan to the Gu trio (4:1:1) to buy 6% of the shares. The transfer of the shares would also be considered as full repayment in the contract (In this way, the Gu trio would not suffer any losses. At most, the shares would be transferred to President Ou).
This valuation of 100 million was very low, but it was considered an equity incentive, so the low stock price was reasonable.
Moreover, this could further bind the Gu trio, especially Gu.|
This is the second novel in this update. The difference between this one and the next one is that this one has a female lead. However, when I published this novel, the proportion of love lines was not much, and it did not feel like the host had taken over the host. In addition, the first few chapters were a little unreasonable (forced into a system or something). In short, the first few chapters were slightly poisonous, but the later chapters were not bad.| Yes, it was the same as Boss Pei's, but with an additional setting.
From the looks of it, the plot description was alright. The main character description was barely passable. The supporting characters and story were very interesting. It was suitable for entertainment without a good book.|
He just reminded the author not to rely too much on the "livestream comedy" routine and to forcefully lower the character's intelligence in order to write a dual-system.
Then, not only did he delete the chapter review, but he also permanently banned it.
It was understandable that a new author would be sensitive to comments, but was there a need to ban it without personal attacks or smearing?
To think that I still wanted to send in my monthly votes. I'll take it as a waste of my time. I'll hang up the book list and see how far you can write.
There was creativity in the book, but the writing was generally smooth.
There was a limited number of words written every day, and the plot mode was too simple. It was too routine, and it was easy to get bored.
Giving it a recommendation of 7 stars.|
Plot 12/20, a high-quality imitation of the richest man, a business war that doesn't know how to write (who can get rid of 11% of tx11% of stocks in one sentence), a baffling plot, losing money for the sake of losing money, not considering the cause and effect, I don't know what it's about, a high-quality imitation of the plot is unique
Character 10/20. The male lead was still okay, but why would a game creation novel need character descriptions?
I'll give the female lead zero points. Originally, she was probably trying to portray a comedic character who wanted to lose money but instead earned it. Now, she had directly become a brainless money-losing character who did not care about the situation or the consequences.
(You even said that if you don't have any results, you'll go home and get married. The officials gave you the green light to do a project, but you want to screw it up. You don't want the company anymore?)
Oh, right, by the way, did you get permission to find someone else's picture on TikTok to be the female lead's portrait?
Selection 15/20 Cat Leo, Who's Dad, Vampire Survivor, Road to Survival, PUBG, Nonsense Kitchen, Titanfall. It was a gradual selection that could be seen. They started from Mini games with low technical skills, then made meat pigeons, then made second-generation FPS, and finally upgraded the game engine. There would not be too fatal and unpopular games.
Writing style 13/20. It's a standard writing style. It mainly depends on the host's reaction and the description of the game content. There's nothing much to say.
15/20 The game structure is reasonable. The game content will not be too complicated and long. The streamer's reaction will not be described too frequently.
In conclusion, 12+10+15+13+15=65/100.
In the eyes of others, it might be a little higher, but they really couldn't stand the plot of the female protagonist who was losing money. If you could accept it, it was basically a good novel.
By the way, the author was very good at deleting comments, banning comments, and controlling comments. After reading the book, he could even go to the post circle to have some fun.| Two main characters and two systems. One wanted to shut down the company, while the other wanted to make a good game.
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Keyword: Game production system loses money to become the richest man, funny
It was similar to Sister Qing's "Becoming the Richest Man in the Game", but the system was split into two.
The male protagonist transmigrated to collect Emotional Value points to unlock the game, and the female protagonist lost money and the system gave ten times the return.
The female protagonist tried every means to lose money, while the male protagonist made a lot of money.
There was not much description of the game's production process in the work. The main focus was on the streamer's gameplay and the wonderful comments from the audience during the live broadcast, so there was more humor.
The author's writing skills were not bad. He wrote down the fun of each game and why it was so good.
Some of the daily scenes described had a certain appeal and would make people happy.
The flaw was that the setting was not particularly strict. The female lead's image was a little monotonous, and her presence was not strong. She was mainly responsible for making jokes, which made people feel that her intelligence was sometimes not online.
There were a lot of comments and bullet screens, but they were a little lacking.
If he didn't delve into it, he could take a look.|

[Tagged: Game Creation, Losing Money, Dual System]
[Description: Two male and female protagonists with systems collide fiercely and establish a super game empire.]
[Thoughts: The female lead is the female version of Boss Pei. She thinks that she has caught the dragon phoenix chick. Who knows that the male lead has a cheat? She really cried herself to death in the toilet.]|
[I, Shen Miao Miao, was forced to take over a game company at the beginning.]
Fortunately, the Rebate System was awakened in time. As long as the company suffered losses, the system would compensate them with ten times the amount!
Therefore, my goal is to bring down the company!
Wealth and freedom!
[I, Gu Sheng, transmigrated to become a game designer at the beginning.]
Fortunately, the Game Treasury System had awakened. As long as he continued to produce explosive games, he would be able to ascend to the throne of the King of Games!
Therefore, my goal is to become bigger and stronger!
Create another glory!
……
When the CEO met the sixth designer, the company's style gradually became abstract.
"Didn't you say that no one is playing the mecha game?
What the hell is this Titanfall?"
"What happened to the horror game market?
What's with Outlast?"
"Didn't you say that second-generation shooting is easy to lose?
You're remaking Call of Duty?"
Looking at the financial report of the full line of profits, Shen Miao Miao's head was buzzing.
She could not lose a single cent, so she could only make up her mind!
"From now on!
Torment the players!"
She did not believe that she could not lose this money!
Hearing this, Gu Sheng unfolded the stack of proposals in his hand.
"Boss, what do you think? Black, Blood, Benevolence, Wolf…Which one should we do first?"|
450,000 words, a casual and daily game creation novel, worth reading.|
It's another day to save the game from the other world ~ It can also be seen as a funny daily life| [Keyword] Daily travel
dual system
[Storyline] Gu Sheng accidentally transmigrated to a parallel world and came with the [Game Treasury System]. As long as the game he developed was popular enough, the Treasury System would be more powerful.
Shen Miao Miao, who was also a transmigrator, as the boss, came with the [Loss Rebate System] and was born with the Wang Duoyu label. As long as I lose enough, I can win!
The battle of intelligence (love)(hate)(love)(courage (hatred)(hatred) between this pair of happy enemies made one unable to hold back their laughter.
[Review] The game's two-person system is very eye-catching and refreshing. Author, you can do it, Miao Miao.| He had been reading a book recently. The writing was smooth and there were not too many bad points.
The interaction between the male and female leads was very warm and funny.
The rhythm of the game was very well grasped, and there was no exaggeration.
It was like pinching President Shen's bun ~ Single Female Lead;
"Suppress the Heavens" was a novel written by the author Suppress the Heavens. It told the story: [The Fate of the Dynasty is a good work. Those who like this genre should not miss it. I hope you can read it patiently. The protagonist in the later part of the novel is extremely domineering.] Founding a dynasty: With the divine weapon of the state in his left hand and the divine weapon of the country (jade seal) in his right hand, he will announce the name of the country to the heavens!
From then on, I was ordered by God to live forever!
Advancing to the imperial court, expanding the territory, reporting to the heavens and the earth, making the ministers govern, and reporting peace to the world. The dynasty is at its peak and is not enough to carry it!
[Advance to the Imperial Dynasty: Report to the heavens and the earth, manifest the golden era, and condense the Golden Dragon of Fate!]
[Advance to the Heavenly Dynasty: Kill the heavens and establish yourself as the heavens. I am the heavens, and the heavens are me!]
"Martial Path Original Spirit: From the White Ape to the Great Sage "was a fantasy and high-level martial arts world novel created by the author, Ah Hong. It told the story of [Multiple Martial Arts Systems]+[Martial Arts Original Spirit]+[Demonized Dynasty]. Han Dong woke up and became a candidate disciple of the martial arts academy at the border of the Great Chu Dynasty. He even brought a chubby orange cat with him and walked into this turbulent era in a daze. At that time, in order to search for natural treasures to prolong his life, Emperor Wu decided to launch a third great expedition to the wilderness outside Great Chu.
Once the news came out, the world was shocked. The Eighteen Paths Rebel King was preparing his troops and preparing to make a comeback. The Three Sun Sect spread its teachings everywhere, and for a time, the flames of war rose in Great Chu.
In this chaotic world, all the forces had their own unique martial arts, such as the bloodline martial arts of the aristocratic families, the God Vanquishing Martial Arts of the Three Suns Sect, the Tianji Martial Arts of the Great Yan Sect, the Occult Orbs Martial Arts of the King of Liang, the Qi Way Martial Arts of the King of Qin, the internal martial arts of the imperial court, the external martial arts, the spiritual beast martial arts, and so on. After the martial arts were mastered, the Original Spirit of Martial Arts would be born in the Inner Scene.
Han Dong was fortunate enough to obtain the Great Void Dao Pagoda, and the white ape's primordial spirit was enlightened to gain sentience.
[White Ape Fist] → [White Ape Original Spirit][The White Ape Original Spirit has been immersed in the special interior 'Small Library' for a long time. Under the dense learning atmosphere of the library, it has crazily studied and successfully comprehended the essence of the Penetrating Fist. The White Ape Fist has broken the limit and become a second-grade martial art-White Ape Penetrating Technique][The White Ape Original Spirit has been training in the special interior 'Small Flaming Mountain' for a long time and has successfully comprehended the Fire Eye. The White Ape Penetrating Technique has mutated and has been upgraded to a third-grade martial art-Vajra White Ape Technique][Vajra White Ape Technique (Perfection): Vajra Arm (White)] Fire Eye (Green):[The white ape primordial spirit dreams of returning to the ancient times and has an intersection with Liu Er primordial spirit. The two fuse to produce a new primordial spirit: White Ape Liu Er primordial spirit.] The character information included: Han Dong is the main character, and the information about him included: I'm actually a good person.
[Look at your ugly face. Do you want me to send you to the Western Paradise to see a doctor? Big Orange is a supporting character. The information about him is: I'm only responsible for lying flat. Let that poop-picker roll…]
[Humph, in the end, it's still cleaning up my sh * t. The white ape's original spirit is a supporting character, and the information about it is: Old White, you look a little like an old friend.]
"The World's Madmen" was a fantasy novel written by the author, Dream Chasing the World. It told the story of "There are 3,000 Great Daos, but one of them is the Mad Dao. I am the Mad Lord, and all the people in the world are Mad Men!"
The palm originated from the Great Dao, sitting and observing the reincarnation of heaven and earth, looking at the vicissitudes of life with a single glance…
This was a miraculous young man who had fused the consciousnesses of two worlds. He had been sealed in black stone for a million years.
When he woke up, the story began…
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"Dao Lord Shennong" was a fantasy novel written by the author, Shenwei Lieutenant. It told the story of a "completely new setting" and "complete system". When you wake up, you become the "agricultural officer" in the fantasy game.
[Dynasty's Prosperity] Version: You cultivate the Solar Period Order, from [Good weather] to [Summon the wind and rain], from [Harvest of the Five Grains] to [All Things Grow], commanding the four seasons and silently developing.
You have made some achievements. You went to war with the army, mastered the Book of Four Agriculture, sealed the river thousands of miles away, opened the way for the army, killed the enemy with Miasma, and blocked the army with Fog Shadow. You have made great achievements and become the Great Minister of Agriculture. You stole the fate of the dynasty. All of them belong to me.
[Revival of Spirit Qi]: You nurture [Mountain Spirit]: Twin lotuses make you immune to fire and water, Seven Star Sword Bamboo's sword light chills nineteen states, parasite species use living beings as nutrients, void species take root in space to absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth…You open up an interior scene, nurture immortal species, and create tens of millions of clones of the [Taiyi Divine Lotus]!
[Ancient Tree of Life] was undying!
"If a True Seed falls into the dantian, the Spirit Nurturing Miao can live for ten thousand years. One day, when the cultivation is complete, my life will be in my hands!"
"The heart fire is the sun, the kidney water is the source, the spleen is the earth, the lung metal is the qi, and the liver qi is the spirit.
With your body as the foundation, you can nurture the original seed and nurture all techniques to become Dao Lord Shennong!"
The character information included: Long Xiao was the supporting male character. His age was 37.0 years old, his birthday was 02/02, his constellation was Aquarius, his height was 195 cm, and his weight was 500 kg. Xia Jing was the supporting male character. His age was 25.0 years old, his birthday was 08/08, and his constellation was Leo. His height was 188 cm, and his weight was 500 kg. Cute, kind-hearted, age 200.0, birthday 03/14, constellation Pisces, height 170 cm, weight 40 kg; Shangxian is a male supporting character, information about him is: handsome!
[His age is 180.0 years old, his birthday is 12/05, his astrological sign is Sagittarius, his height is 190 cm, and his weight is 70 kg. The Saint Fairy is the supporting male character. The information about him is as follows: Cold, his age is 181.0 years old, his birthday is 10/18, his astrological sign is Libra, his height is 185 cm, and his weight is 65 kg. Zhao Xing is the male character, his age is 17.0 years old, his birthday is 03/19, his astrological sign is Pisces, and his height is 178.0 cm.] Lynx was the supporting male character, his age was 2.0 years old, his birthday was 09/01, his constellation was Virgo, his height was 50.0 cm, and his weight was 500.0 kg. Chen Shijie was the supporting male character, his age was 37.0 years old, his birthday was 02/02, his constellation was Aquarius, his height was 172.0 cm, and his weight was 50.0 kg. Liu Tianning was the supporting male character. His age was 195.0 years old, his birthday was 08/03, and his constellation was Leo. His height was 180.0 cm, and his weight was 50.0 kg. The overall evaluation of this book was: "I've entered the game, and there's a player interface (but it's a native identity). It's a version where the players have not yet arrived."
The main attraction was the novel background, the various cultivation systems, and the foresight of the protagonist.
I recommend you.|
It was similar to a Super Mechanic who had become an NPC in the early stages of the game.
It had grown continuously during the rise and fall of the ancient dynasties.
The class and skill settings were more reasonable and appropriate.
[New Setting]
When you wake up, you have become the [Agriculture Bureau] officer in the fantasy game.
[Dynasty's Prosperity] Version: You cultivate the Solar Period Order, from [Good weather] to [Summon the wind and rain], from [Harvest of the Five Grains] to [All Things Grow], commanding the four seasons and silently developing.
You have made some achievements. You went to war with the army, mastered the Book of Four Agriculture, sealed the river thousands of miles away, opened the way for the army, killed the enemy with Miasma, and blocked the army with Fog Shadow. You have made great achievements and become the Great Minister of Agriculture. You stole the fate of the dynasty. All of them belong to me.
[Revival of Spirit Qi]: You nurture [Mountain Spirit]: Twin lotuses make you immune to fire and water, Seven Star Sword Bamboo's sword light chills nineteen states, parasite species use living beings as nutrients, void species take root in space to absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth…You open up an interior scene, nurture immortal species, and create tens of millions of clones of the [Taiyi Divine Lotus]!
[Ancient Tree of Life] was undying!
"If a True Seed falls into the dantian, the Spirit Nurturing Miao can live for ten thousand years. One day, when the cultivation is complete, my life will be in my hands!"
"The heart fire is the sun, the kidney water is the source, the spleen is the earth, the lung metal is the qi, and the liver qi is the spirit.
With your body as the foundation, you will be able to nurture the primordial seed, nurture all techniques, and become Daolord Shennong!"|
[Daolord Shennong]
In the Xianxia world, the game background was Dao Lord Shennong.|
In the current version, the Farming Style was about cultivating plants. In order to push the plot forward, there was a version update in the settings. It could be considered to have solved the problem of the lack of strength in the later stages of the Farming Style, but it still depended on the writing at the back.|
It was a rare game novel that won through setting.
For the time being, it was a small masterpiece.|
[74 points. Good grass. Game transmigration]
Entering the game would bring the player interface (but with the identity of a native). It was a version where the players had not yet descended.
The main attraction was the novel background, the various cultivation systems, and the foresight of the protagonist.
It felt like a farming version of a Super Mechanic. The plot was almost like the main character's class changing from Mechanic to Farmer. It could be considered a real farming style.|
This is the work of a god.
It seemed that the author had a deep foundation. The writing was natural and the plot was interesting.|
Food and fodder-
Game writing, entering the game, working as a temporary worker in Dynasty, working hard to get into the organization.
Actually, it could also be seen as an upgrade stream.
Because he was familiar with the development of the game, he didn't lack any fun points.
His writing was smooth and his IQ was on the line.
It could kill time.|
Saplings?
But divine grass.
If it looked good, it would be sauce.|
[National Style Game][New Setting] When you wake up, you have become the agricultural officer in the fantasy game.
[Dynasty's Prosperity] Version: You cultivate the Solar Period Order, from [Good weather] to [Summon the wind and rain], from [Harvest of the Five Grains] to [All Things Grow], commanding the four seasons and silently developing.
You have made some achievements. You went to war with the army, mastered the Book of Four Agriculture, sealed the river thousands of miles away, opened the way for the army, killed the enemy with Miasma, and blocked the army with Fog Shadow. You have made great achievements and become the Great Minister of Agriculture. You stole the fate of the dynasty. All of them belong to me.
[Revival of Spirit Qi]: You nurture [Mountain Spirit]: Twin lotuses make you immune to fire and water, Seven Star Sword Bamboo's sword light chills nineteen states, parasite species use living beings as nutrients, void species take root in space to absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth…You open up an interior scene, nurture immortal species, and create tens of millions of clones of the [Taiyi Divine Lotus]!
[Ancient Tree of Life] was undying!
"If a True Seed falls into the dantian, the Spirit Nurturing Miao can live for ten thousand years. One day, when the cultivation is complete, my life will be in my hands!"
"The heart fire is the sun, the kidney water is the source, the spleen is the earth, the lung metal is the qi, and the liver qi is the spirit.
With your body as the foundation, you will be able to nurture the primordial seed, nurture all techniques, and become Daolord Shennong!"|
It's still a seedling. At present, it can be considered a very good grain. I really love farming.| It's a very good national style novel. I hope it won't cut| I feel like the author has opened up a new race track. I hope the author will lead a new trend.| The immortal officials in charge of agriculture had all kinds of agricultural spells that were refreshing and looked not bad.|
The theme of the leveling stream was relatively new.
The main character was reborn and obtained opportunities from the memories of his previous life. It was not the Darkness Style.
Currently, there are no major poison points, no female lead.| It was a very good book, and I highly recommend reading it!
Now, it's at the immortal herb level.
4?
New upgrade system, old author, more than 5,000 first orders on the shelves, the quality is completely passable| It was a normal comment, but it was deleted and made permanent. Fortunately, it was just published. It cost 2.50 yuan, so it was not a big loss.| It was a very good immortal cultivation text. It was a little new, but the writing style was experienced.
Writing: 3.5
[Originality: 3.5]
[In conclusion, it feels like a game novel, but it also feels like an immortal cultivator.]|
Xianmiao, I think it's suitable to read it all in one go. It's a little tiring to chase after it.| Awesome, the world view, level, class, etc. were all quite complete.| Here comes the book of full-time agriculture, it's good| 2024.5.19. I read dozens of chapters yesterday. Before the future transmigration online game began, I was also a prophet. The character description was not bad. There was nothing wrong with it at the moment. The description of family relationships was not bad. It was a classic Chinese style. The dungeon was currently developing.
Chasing, four stars| A novel with a grand background| Miao Miao, looks good, the content is good, the daily update volume is large, I wonder which author wrote this.
Four stars recommendation index| It was similar to a Super Divine Mechanic, but it was a farming style.
It's very interesting.| The protagonist had transmigrated into the game, and there were still hundreds of years before players would log in. Currently, the protagonist was using his previous experience to improve himself step by step. The writing was more innovative.| When you wake up, you have become the [Agriculture Bureau] officer in the fantasy game.
[Dynasty's Prosperity] Version: You cultivate the Solar Period Order, from [Good weather] to [Summon the wind and rain], from [Harvest of the Five Grains] to [All Things Grow], commanding the four seasons and silently developing.
You have made some achievements. You went to war with the army, mastered the Book of Four Agriculture, sealed the river thousands of miles away, opened the way for the army, killed the enemy with Miasma, and blocked the army with Fog Shadow. You have made great achievements and become the Great Minister of Agriculture. You stole the fate of the dynasty. All of them belong to me.|
It had been a long time since he had seen such a novel with such creativity and a stable author.
The world view of this novel was a bit like a mortal's cultivation of the Way of Confucius. The narration was similar, neither fast nor slow, with climaxes and transition.
Five star recommendation.|

The setting is interesting, the writing is good, and the writing is smooth. It's a rare good book.
Easy without a female lead| 3-star. It should still be in the early development stage. It's not bad.|
8 points for good books
The author was very familiar with the routine. He had an assessment every two days and a secret realm every three days. He had been feeling good all this time.| When he woke up, Zhao Xing had become an official in the fantasy game!
[Pomegranate Flower Jade Boat, When Clouds and Rain Flow Between Your Fingers]
When he woke up, Zhao Xing had become an official in the fantasy game.
From favorable weather to summoning the wind and rain, from abundant grain to the growth of all things, commanding the four seasons, silently developing.
He had opened up the Inner Scene Land, nurtured the Immortal Seed, and created millions of clones of the Taiyi Divine Lotus!
The Ancient Life Tree was undying!|
Farming style!
The first part is interesting, so hurry up and write the rest!|
The author wrote it according to his own words and didn't really listen to opinions, but it was still acceptable.| It could be seen that the author wanted to perfect the various settings he had constructed.
The author spent a lot of time on the various tests and training the protagonist went through. This was a kind of enjoyment for those who were serious about reading the book. After all, it would be good to have less criticism and less viewing experience under the perfect setting. However, for readers who only wanted to see blood flow, the pace of the book was slow, and it might be a little torturous to read.|[Key words: Cultivation, military, imperial court setting, more fascinating]
Experience: It's good, it's really good. I can see an old author pretending to be a newbie in one breath.
It's not poisonous overall, it's very smooth, but the author's math is not very good, and he often makes mistakes in numbers.| I didn't manage to get into it the first time, but I continued reading when there was nothing else to read. It's really not bad. The author did a good job setting the details. There's no big problem with the logic. He updates frequently too, so I can catch up.| The fantasy setting was a game that the protagonist had played before.
Spells were quite interesting. There were many settings, but they were not long-winded. It was quite comfortable to read. I've ordered it, but I don't plan to order it now. I'll read it after I finish it.
[PS: Please express your reader's opinion in my opinion (in case you get gagged)]
There was nothing wrong with readers discussing the content of a single chapter. It was fine to put it in the group chat or to add more details to the book review. However, the author himself posted it in the main content and deleted it in the end.
It was over.|
The system is strict, rich, wonderful, the writing is smooth, the plot is cool, and it's a rare cool article.| Daolord Shennong, 88 points.
A short comment:
A fantasy novel with a foundation of 80 points + a well-designed system = a fantasy novel suitable for a wide range of people (immortal grass for some people), a must-read book.
Weakness:
There were two small flaws.
One was that the book used more conventional tactics. Elements such as academies, imperial examinations, dynasties, and alien wars were more common. There was also an awkward pretentious plot in the middle of the story that might dissuade a small number of readers.
The second was that the protagonist's character was very ordinary, and the author did not elaborate on the reason why the protagonist pursued longevity.
The overall setting was too standard, so much so that the performance of the supporting characters was not as outstanding as the ones in the main characters (of course, you could also say that the author's description of the supporting characters was too outstanding).
Strengths:
The greatest advantage of this book was its innovative setting.
Whether it was the professional system that had its own uses or the tradition of the 24 solar terms and the five elements;
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